How do movies or television influence people`s behavior? Use reasons and specific examples to support your answer.
When it comes to the issue the effects of television on human’s behavior, some people believe that movie and programs of television have numerous negative influences on their behavior. However, others have the opposite view. As far as I am concerned, the former point carries more weight. I take this position on account the following reasons.
First and the most important reason is that most movies on television expand violence in the society. In fact, these kinds of movies make us to be less sensitive toward the severity, while this trend will brings many adverse impacts on people’s manner, especially children. For example, in a one movie the main actor can kill some one, and he can play again in another movie. So, children think that death is not permanent and killing some one is not horrible. In this way, movies of the television can lead people to ignore many of moral principles.
A further point we must consider is that many of television channels gain their revenue from advertisements. Therefore, it is quite normal they tend to encourage people to buy new things more and more, even though people they do not need them. I think that a small example can give some light on this matter. Two week ago, when I was watching television, in one advertisement I saw a celebrity introduce a new smart phone, which was very expensive. The presence the celebrities in the advertisement encouraged me to going to shopping center for purchasing that smart phones, while I really did not need it. This scenario is the same for many other things which were useful less for me, but I purchase them.
Apart from points I made above, television lead people to be more in active. Indeed, attractive television’s programs cause people, especially juveniles to send much of their time to watch them, while for watching them we do not need to do anything for watching television, unless sit on the sofa and push the button of remote control for changing the channel. As a result, a large number of the modern people suffer of obesity and its negative consequences like heart attack, stork, and high blood pressure.
All above evidence supports this undeniable fact the most of television’s movies expand violence among society, encourage people to purchase usefulness things, and make people more inactive. Although, a small part of television program may be beneficial for people, no one can ignore that a great deal of them have numerous negative impacts on peoples behavior.
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'first', 'however', 'may', 'really', 'so', 'therefore', 'while', 'apart from', 'for example', 'i think', 'in fact', 'as a result']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.235537190083 0.229887763892 102% => OK
Verbs: 0.134297520661 0.158761421928 85% => OK
Adjectives: 0.103305785124 0.0866891130778 119% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0578512396694 0.046263068375 125% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0578512396694 0.0685040099705 84% => OK
Prepositions: 0.119834710744 0.118717715034 101% => OK
Participles: 0.0165289256198 0.0351676179071 47% => Some participles wanted.
Conjunctions: 2.77215419627 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0247933884298 0.0309702414327 80% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00188951952338 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0888429752066 0.0887237588012 100% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0165289256198 0.0209618222197 79% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00826446280992 0.0139019557991 59% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2510.0 2387.08602151 105% => OK
No of words: 419.0 408.028673835 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.99045346062 5.86048508987 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.52432199235 4.48200974243 101% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.350835322196 0.338922669872 104% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.257756563246 0.251872472559 102% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.193317422434 0.174417080927 111% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.116945107399 0.112833075102 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77215419627 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 229.0 212.727598566 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.546539379475 0.524397521467 104% => OK
Word variations: 63.3135078722 59.2087087015 107% => OK
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6684587814 97% => OK
Sentence length: 20.95 20.5533526081 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.2249102996 48.84282405 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.5 120.699889404 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.95 20.5533526081 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.65 0.644075263715 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.5376344086 110% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.54480286738 90% => OK
Readability: 46.7256563246 45.7405998639 102% => OK
Elegance: 1.48760330579 1.45489161554 102% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.197270329798 0.300154397459 66% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.06626888253 0.103427244359 64% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0475214391161 0.0752933317313 63% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.473084304037 0.497263757937 95% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.145180613729 0.151897553556 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0711502649564 0.114077575197 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0599288994603 0.0781384742642 77% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.325246580124 0.336927656856 97% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.026743610946 0.067059652881 40% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141718232945 0.210909579961 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0326364931596 0.0618886996521 53% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8870967742 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.86379928315 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.91756272401 61% => OK
Positive topic words: 8.0 8.42114695341 95% => OK
Negative topic words: 7.0 2.4623655914 284% => OK
Neutral topic words: 1.0 2.75985663082 36% => OK
Total topic words: 16.0 13.6433691756 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 86.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 26.0 Out of 30
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.