It is better to ask your own knowledge and experience to solve problems than to ask other people for advice.

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It is better to ask your own knowledge and experience to solve problems than to ask other people for advice.

Knowledge and experience are the biggest weapons against problems and every now and then people seek for advice in complex matters. Other people who already have faced similar situations are sought after to provide their judgement of the situation. In my view it is better to ask your own knowledge and experience to approach problems than to ask other peoples. There are several reasons for this stance.

Firstly, seeking for advice frequently may cloud one's judgement. All us have met people who are always bewildered and do not know what they are supposed to do, and their confusion only increases as they approach more and more peoples for help. This happens because as they get more and more ideas from other people it becomes difficult for them to single out one solution. For instance, a friend of mine wanted to study abroad, but he was not sure about it as a result he started taking advice from all the friends consequently he ended up more confused than he had ever been.

Secondly, seeking for an expert or mature insight debilitates one from taking an individual instance, be it a situation related to business, government, education or family. Looking up to others will take away the sense of individuality from one seeking the advice. For instance, a well known politician in India Mr. Rahul Gandhi is well know for consulting a lot with his mother before making any moves, as a result his image after being in politics for life time is that of an immature politician.

In addition, some times people get persuaded by strong arguments as the people who give advice tend to defend their stand. This results in people ending up taking decision they are not happy about. For instance, in any public setting where people discuss about political issues, one can observe that when a contender presents strong arguments and facts other contenders yield to the point supported by the arguments.

However, there are many benefits of taking advice from people who have experience in dealing with similar problems, that is why we see most of the high positions filled by people with white hairs. There are several situations when one is not capable of handling the situations as they are more complex in nature or might be a first timer for peoples, in such situations taking help from experts is the right thing to do. But otherwise one should look for weapons they have in their own inventory.

In conclusion, for the reasons given above one should be meticulous about asking advice from others. It only helps when taken in right situation. Therefore, it can be said that one should look up to his own expertise to solve problems he faces.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, firstly, however, if, look, may, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, well, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, as a result, in my view

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 15.1003584229 146% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 43.0788530466 86% => OK
Preposition: 61.0 52.1666666667 117% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.0752688172 186% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2208.0 1977.66487455 112% => OK
No of words: 455.0 407.700716846 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.85274725275 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.61852021839 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47430363554 2.67179642975 93% => OK
Unique words: 235.0 212.727598566 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.516483516484 0.524837075471 98% => OK
syllable_count: 702.9 618.680645161 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.994623655914 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.3733105023 48.9658058833 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.4 100.406767564 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.75 20.6045352989 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.45 5.45110844103 155% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.53405017921 132% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.299710627479 0.236089414692 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0964810303764 0.076458572812 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.122730368966 0.0737576698707 166% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.16855802446 0.150856017488 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.146766421154 0.0645574589148 227% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 11.7677419355 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 58.1214874552 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.15 10.9000537634 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.34 8.01818996416 104% => OK
difficult_words: 104.0 86.8835125448 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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