It is better for children to choose jobs that are similar to their parents’ jobs than to choose jobs that are very different from their parents’ job.

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It is better for children to choose jobs that are similar to their parents’ jobs than to choose jobs that are very different from their parents’ job.

Choosing a profession is a problem that a lot of people find it very decisive and difficult to solve. Two important factor in making such decisions are parents job and personal interest. In my opinion, choosing a job that is very different from the parent's job is both challenging and difficult to pursue. However, personal interest should have a higher weight in the process. So, neither similarity or difference of parents job should have a predominant effect on the decision process.

First of all, by choosing a job similar to your parents you have the chance to use all of their experiences. These experiences include both home management and working experience. As a result, you won't start from scratch and whenever you need a consult you have your parents beside you to help you. On the other hand, by choosing a job dissimilar to your parents' job, you need to double or even triple times your efforts to learn new things and be successful.

Second, self-interest should play a significant role in the process of job selection. Nonetheless, the personal abilities are a restrictive factor that we have to take into consideration. However, nothing can stop a strong will. So, when self-interest comes into play, other factors become blurred and the child should be assured that he or she should follow his/her dreams, otherwise the child may feel regret that had not followed his personal dream or interest.

As discussed in above lines, children should make a free and wise decision by receiving an honest advice and the similarity or dissimilarity of a job to parents job should not be a restrictive element for children.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 401, Rule ID: NEITHER_NOR[1]
Message: Use 'nor' with neither.
Suggestion: nor
... in the process. So, neither similarity or difference of parents job should have a...
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Line 3, column 244, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...tart from scratch and whenever you need a consult you have your parents beside you to hel...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, may, nonetheless, second, so, as a result, first of all, in my opinion, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 15.1003584229 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 43.0788530466 60% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 52.1666666667 61% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1364.0 1977.66487455 69% => OK
No of words: 275.0 407.700716846 67% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 4.48103885553 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84961009367 2.67179642975 107% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 212.727598566 71% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.552727272727 0.524837075471 105% => OK
syllable_count: 423.9 618.680645161 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.59856630824 31% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.2742473765 48.9658058833 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.4285714286 100.406767564 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6428571429 20.6045352989 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.78571428571 5.45110844103 143% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.368276186516 0.236089414692 156% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.137352766892 0.076458572812 180% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.13960880518 0.0737576698707 189% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.226557689076 0.150856017488 150% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.11831106166 0.0645574589148 183% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 11.7677419355 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 10.9000537634 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.97 8.01818996416 99% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 86.8835125448 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:

para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.

So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:

reasons == advantages or

reasons == disadvantages

for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.


Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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