It is better for children to grow up in the countryside than in a big city. Do you agree or disagree? Use specific reasons and examples to develop your essay.
First and foremost, children are really vulnerable and they need to breathe healthy air and also need to eat healthy food which are available in rural areas. In contrast in big cities, there are lots of pollutions such as air pollution and most people suffer from these pollutions. Children can easily become sick. I remember when I was a child, I have always been sick and had a breathing problem. I was allergic to many fruits and food. After visiting lots of doctors, my parents realized that when we go to the countryside for a picnic or for visiting our families, I had no problem for some days and they knew that the polluted air and water were the most important reason that I was always sick. This experience taught my family that the place where a child grows up is the most important factor in his/her health.
Another reason is that in the country children learn to have a simple life style and they learn to try hard to be successful. People there learn to like and respect each other. But in big cities, people are always in a hurry and they are always angry because of the time that they spend in heavy traffics. For example, I have two cousins. One of them is Sarah who had lived in a countryside and the other one, Maryam, live in a big and modern city. Maryam has a hectic lifestyle and she never has enough time to spend with her family and she always wants more. She spends most of her time on the Internet. On the other hand, Sarah is a really different and she spends most of her time on studying. She is now really successful and she had a really simple lifestyle.
In sum, not only will the place that a child grow up would affect his/her healthiness, but also it has a great effect on his/her future. In my opinion, the country sides are the best place for the children to grow up and I have always been thankful to my parents to live in such a beautiful and healthy place.
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Suggestion: contrast,
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'first', 'if', 'really', 'so', 'for example', 'in contrast', 'such as', 'in my opinion', 'on the other hand']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.19689119171 0.229887763892 86% => OK
Verbs: 0.155440414508 0.158761421928 98% => OK
Adjectives: 0.108808290155 0.0866891130778 126% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0621761658031 0.046263068375 134% => OK
Pronouns: 0.080310880829 0.0685040099705 117% => OK
Prepositions: 0.103626943005 0.118717715034 87% => OK
Participles: 0.0181347150259 0.0351676179071 52% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.29006288522 2.67179642975 86% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0310880829016 0.0309702414327 100% => OK
Particles: 0.00518134715026 0.00188951952338 274% => OK
Determiners: 0.0880829015544 0.0887237588012 99% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.00777202072539 0.0209618222197 37% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0129533678756 0.0139019557991 93% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1897.0 2387.08602151 79% => OK
No of words: 355.0 408.028673835 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.34366197183 5.86048508987 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34067318298 4.48200974243 97% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.276056338028 0.338922669872 81% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.169014084507 0.251872472559 67% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.112676056338 0.174417080927 65% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0647887323944 0.112833075102 57% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.29006288522 2.67179642975 86% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 212.727598566 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.481690140845 0.524397521467 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 50.0846239709 59.2087087015 85% => OK
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6684587814 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.7222222222 20.5533526081 96% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.6862711186 48.84282405 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.388888889 120.699889404 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7222222222 20.5533526081 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.611111111111 0.644075263715 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.5376344086 66% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.54480286738 18% => OK
Readability: 36.6236306729 45.7405998639 80% => OK
Elegance: 1.06956521739 1.45489161554 74% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.338616389915 0.300154397459 113% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.142620119974 0.103427244359 138% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.143795456437 0.0752933317313 191% => Ideas in sentences are similar.
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.430285117572 0.497263757937 87% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.158282359536 0.151897553556 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.118769852371 0.114077575197 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.076822959036 0.0781384742642 98% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.370377309413 0.336927656856 110% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0516162353128 0.067059652881 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.265346472279 0.210909579961 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0157136802509 0.0618886996521 25% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8870967742 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.86379928315 155% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.91756272401 81% => OK
Positive topic words: 8.0 8.42114695341 95% => OK
Negative topic words: 5.0 2.4623655914 203% => OK
Neutral topic words: 3.0 2.75985663082 109% => OK
Total topic words: 16.0 13.6433691756 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.