Is it better to enjoy your money when you earn it or is it better to save your money for sometimes in the future?
Financial management is a very important skill in life, however, it is not an intuitive skill but it can be learned. One key element to develop this skill is to figure out what and when to spend the money earned. Some people prefer to spend it a soon as possible while other prefer to save most of it. I think that in life, we all should have the right balance between spending and saving money, therefore, I feel more agree with saving money for the future, because life is unpredictable and we can get fire or sick. Moreover, if we have saved money through our professional life, we would be able to buy a nicer house or a top tier car. In addition, having money saved will make fells you more free.
First, and foremost. The future is unpredictable. Some people say that the present is the only true, because the future and the past are unknown. This is quite important to consider, because we do not know what future has saved for us, we can get sick, lose our job, or merely have a big family. All these things would ended in more money to facing them, so it is a good idea to have some money saved for this occasion.
Secondly, nicer house and car. Without considering a must, having a bigger account would allow me to buy a better house and a car. Maybe this is not as important as other reasons, for me it has to be considered.
Finally, freedom. The last and most important reason to prefer saving instead spending the money is to enjoy the feel of freedom caused by the certainty of having big savings in the bank. Unlike other people, having enough money saved allows you to take advantage of several opportunities that require liquidity.
In conclusion, my opinion stated in the introduction is based on freedom, future and fancy things as I mentioned above.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: The verb 'would' requires the base form of the verb: 'end'
Suggestion: end
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...l opportunities that require liquidity. In conclusion, my opinion stated in the ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, however, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, while, as to, i feel, i think, in addition, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.0286738351 36% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 43.0788530466 74% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 52.1666666667 67% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1456.0 1977.66487455 74% => OK
No of words: 323.0 407.700716846 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.50773993808 4.8611393121 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23936324884 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43711662111 2.67179642975 91% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 212.727598566 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.526315789474 0.524837075471 100% => OK
syllable_count: 474.3 618.680645161 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.994623655914 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.5194138165 48.9658058833 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.6470588235 100.406767564 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 20.6045352989 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.17647058824 5.45110844103 150% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.253068059283 0.236089414692 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0740620115864 0.076458572812 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0591493278815 0.0737576698707 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124424811689 0.150856017488 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0622081645532 0.0645574589148 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 11.7677419355 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.88 10.9000537634 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.22 8.01818996416 90% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 86.8835125448 62% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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