It is generally agreed that society benefits from the work of its members. Compare the contributions of artists to society with the contributions of scientists to society. Which type of contribution do you think is valued more by your society?
Upon the above question, different people have different opinions based on their emotions, educations, cultures, etc. From my point of view, both artists and scientists are important influences on people and they play significant roles in society. However, I think contributions of scholars is valued more by my country. In the following paragraphs, I will try to explain my position more clearly.
First and foremost, scientists and researchers spend most of their time in laboratories or companies to invent new things. For example, they discover better drugs for people and help them recover from ailments in a more convenient way. Undoubtedly, people will not survive without the help of scientists. Some researchers investigate new ways to make better foods for people. They manipulate the genome of plants like wheat and rice in order to create new features. According to the latest researchers which were published in well-known journals half of our diet consists of genetically modified foods.
In the second place, scientists invent new things to help people do their ordinary tasks easily. For example, Japanese scholars produce new robots that can take care of children, wash dirty dishes and so forth. In addition, people can communicate with their friends and relatives easily by their cell phone and no one can deny its importance in our daily lives.
Finally, it is important to bear in mind that societies also benefit from the work of artists. Painters create masterpieces and musicians hold great concerts where people can feel happy and relaxed. In my opinion, art is the symbol of culture and people will get more information about one country, if they study its art.
Taking all the aforementioned arguments into account, it can be concluded that although both scientists and artists play significant role in my country, the work of scholars is valued more in my country based on the reasons which I outlined above.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, however, if, second, so, well, for example, i think, in addition, in my opinion, in the second place
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 15.1003584229 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 43.0788530466 65% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 52.1666666667 90% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1633.0 1977.66487455 83% => OK
No of words: 314.0 407.700716846 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.20063694268 4.8611393121 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20951839842 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77577871279 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 212.727598566 88% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.59872611465 0.524837075471 114% => OK
syllable_count: 494.1 618.680645161 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.994623655914 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.9716755905 48.9658058833 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.0588235294 100.406767564 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4705882353 20.6045352989 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.47058823529 5.45110844103 137% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.159079020891 0.236089414692 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0489687391204 0.076458572812 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0638779905082 0.0737576698707 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0852720686425 0.150856017488 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0410301941932 0.0645574589148 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 11.7677419355 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 58.1214874552 92% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.88 10.9000537634 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.75 8.01818996416 109% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 86.8835125448 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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