Education is the backbone of a nation and schools plays a vital in every student's life. Obviously I do support building a new schools in my community. And I think in this way for mainly the increased number of students are going out for study nowadays and the possible job opportunities can be created through this school.
First and foremost, a high school in the community can benefit the local students in many ways. Now around 200 students are passing out primary level of education every year in our community. That implies around 1000 students are going outward for higher level education. This daily migration requires certain transport, food and other logistics arrangement which sum up to a certain amount of cost. A high school in the community can save all these costs along with the wasted time and tiredness caused by 2 hours of journey every day. Moreover, parents will feel relieved when they will know that their children are within the community. Additionally, in our community we know each other very well. If all the students go to the same school then they can help each other even out of school times hence providing a round the clock cooperative education system.
Furthermore, a new school will definitely bring some new jobs in the community, which is definitely a good sign specially in today's precarious economic condition. A school requires teachers, administrative officers and other stuffs to operate the overall student affairs. These opportunities will bring in new educated personnel in the community or even some qualified people from our own community can join this new school. Along with these, other businesses like book stores, snack shops will grow quickly around the schools. That way few more jobs and businesses will be created within the community thus creating a good impact to the economy around us.
Finally, the community high schools are banner for the community themselves. I know some community high schools have become so popular either by playing or academic success, that now the whole community is known by it's school. I believe if our students try their best and teachers put their best effort, our community high school can bring us that level of fame. With this would be success, more experienced teachers will join our school and students will get better quality education and sports instructions from them to improve their skills to the next level.
Thus, keeping above points in mind, it is fair to conclude that a new high school will give the local students an overall better educational environment, improve the economy and can bring the community out to greater population through the earned fame by our students. As a result, I strongly support building the new high school in our community and lay the foundation of a better future.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 133, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'school'?
Suggestion: school
.... Obviously I do support building a new schools in my community. And I think in this wa...
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Line 5, column 641, Rule ID: NOUN_AROUND_IT[1]
Message: Consider using 'the surrounding economy'?
Suggestion: the surrounding economy
...ommunity thus creating a good impact to the economy around us. Finally, the community high school...
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Line 9, column 66, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...s in mind, it is fair to conclude that a new high school will give the local stud...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, furthermore, hence, if, moreover, so, then, thus, well, even so, i think, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 9.8082437276 173% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 43.0788530466 95% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 52.1666666667 104% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2362.0 1977.66487455 119% => OK
No of words: 468.0 407.700716846 115% => OK
Chars per words: 5.04700854701 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.65116196802 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66264352447 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 229.0 212.727598566 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.489316239316 0.524837075471 93% => OK
syllable_count: 716.4 618.680645161 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.994623655914 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.6486148368 48.9658058833 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.363636364 100.406767564 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2727272727 20.6045352989 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.59090909091 5.45110844103 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 11.8709677419 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.143354183213 0.236089414692 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0553558743596 0.076458572812 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0477794456399 0.0737576698707 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103802783694 0.150856017488 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0310793836419 0.0645574589148 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 11.7677419355 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 58.1214874552 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.01 10.9000537634 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.71 8.01818996416 96% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 86.8835125448 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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