The topic here list two well know personality named, John F. Kennedy and Martin Luther King, the one's who have made important contribution in shaping the constitution and assembly of United States. There are many other world leaders who have made major contribution for upliftment of their country. Among many I admire the most - Mohan Das Karmachand Gandhi also called as Gandhiji. He is considered as "Father of nation" of India. The another important leader currently working for better future of India is Mr. Narendra Modi. I consider this two leaders as influencor for future generation, the one from past who made the country and the another one who is developing the country.
As said above Gandhiji, the one who made the nation, has made important contribution in freedom struggle movement back in 1947. He used to believe in non violence, and all his movement stating from "satyagrah" to "Dandi March" were all non violent acts, due to which the British goverment was neither able to suppress nor capture him. He used to think stategically, for example he used to say "Boycott Foreign Goods", and with slogans he tried to break the goverment economically and at last that lead to one of the important reason in getting freedom. He had also started the movement to eradicate the racial discrimination in South Africa during his trip.
Another great leader, Mr Narendra Modi, currently serving as Prime Minister of India, is consider as a diplomatic leader and has the capacity to tackle international problems. He has initiated movement like "Made in India" to create job oppurtunity for young Indians, "Digital India" to speed up the administration, "Swach Bharat(Clean India)" to spread the importance of cleanliness, "Mann ki Batt(Speech of mind )" to influence young Indians to take up the task for development of their country and many other such important changes.
To put it briefly, the two important leader one who made the foundation of India-"Gandhiji" and the one who is currently developing the country on that foundation-"Narendra Modi" are the two most important leader for India, who have not only influenced the poeple of India but has also set the example for rest of the world.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, briefly, but, if, so, well, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 9.8082437276 0% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 43.0788530466 42% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 52.1666666667 92% => OK
Nominalization: 20.0 8.0752688172 248% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1944.0 1977.66487455 98% => OK
No of words: 365.0 407.700716846 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.32602739726 4.8611393121 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37092360658 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.43860030398 2.67179642975 129% => OK
Unique words: 201.0 212.727598566 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.550684931507 0.524837075471 105% => OK
syllable_count: 609.3 618.680645161 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 6.0 3.08781362007 194% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.1344086022 129% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 98.9719863478 48.9658058833 202% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 138.857142857 100.406767564 138% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.0714285714 20.6045352989 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.21428571429 5.45110844103 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.20837581591 0.236089414692 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0943302022544 0.076458572812 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0909178634451 0.0737576698707 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145666635529 0.150856017488 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0843281236524 0.0645574589148 131% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.7 11.7677419355 142% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.63 58.1214874552 63% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 10.1575268817 144% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.93 10.9000537634 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.17 8.01818996416 114% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 86.8835125448 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.0537634409 123% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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