Many people believe that parents are too permissive with their children nowadays. Do you agree that this is a problem? Defend your answer.
Children naturally demand a lot for anything. Parents, many times, face a condition whether they have to accept or reject such requests. Many parents probably would say “No”, but some people argue, however, the otherwise. Being too permissive for their children is somewhat considered as a problem, but I personally it is not because of some ground reasons.
Happiness is a key in children’s intelligence development. Children would be happy if their requests are granted. Their happy feelings would allow their mind to accept more knowledge and information more quickly. On the other hand, children who do not get what they want might show disappointment or even aggressive behaviors. Such behaviors would block their willingness to play and learn new things.
Permissive parents get a good credit from their children. Accepted requests would make children love their parents more. Because of the simple way of thinking, children would judge people from the very basic actions like granting their demand. Permissive parents would tend to develop submissive children that more adhere to their parents’ orders. On contrary, unsatisfied kids tend to neglect their parents as a way to express their dissatisfaction feeling.
Being strict parents, the otherwise, would bring some unexpected problems. If children get used to a rejection, it possibly will shape them into a less vocal person. In the long run, they would hesitate to express their wants because they cannot accept more rejections. Strict parents would have a gap relationship with their children. The stricter the parents are, the more children will feel reluctant to communicate or socialize with their parents. Strict behaviors from parents could make children to imitate them. Such behaviors are not good for children because it would make them become stiff in social life.
In conclusion, being too permissive should be worried too much. Instead, permissive parents would help kids to undergo their childhood memories with happiness, satisfaction and discipline. However, it is still important for parents to evaluate their children’s requests wisely that would favor their intelligence and emotion development.
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'however', 'if', 'so', 'still', 'in conclusion', 'on the other hand']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.231738035264 0.229887763892 101% => OK
Verbs: 0.158690176322 0.158761421928 100% => OK
Adjectives: 0.095717884131 0.0866891130778 110% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0654911838791 0.046263068375 142% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0730478589421 0.0685040099705 107% => OK
Prepositions: 0.0780856423174 0.118717715034 66% => OK
Participles: 0.0201511335013 0.0351676179071 57% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.90302363914 2.67179642975 109% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0327455919395 0.0309702414327 106% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00188951952338 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0554156171285 0.0887237588012 62% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0478589420655 0.0209618222197 228% => Less modal verbs wanted (like 'must , shall , will , should , would , can , could , may , and might').
WH_determiners: 0.00503778337531 0.0139019557991 36% => Some subClauses wanted starting by 'Which, Who, What, Whom, Whose.....'
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2217.0 2387.08602151 93% => OK
No of words: 337.0 408.028673835 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.57863501484 5.86048508987 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28457229495 4.48200974243 96% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.403560830861 0.338922669872 119% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.341246290801 0.251872472559 135% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.258160237389 0.174417080927 148% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.154302670623 0.112833075102 137% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90302363914 2.67179642975 109% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 212.727598566 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.53115727003 0.524397521467 101% => OK
Word variations: 56.3980414534 59.2087087015 95% => OK
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6684587814 116% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0416666667 20.5533526081 68% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.1934968368 48.84282405 58% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.375 120.699889404 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.0416666667 20.5533526081 68% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.291666666667 0.644075263715 45% => More Discourse Markers wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.5376344086 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.54480286738 18% => OK
Readability: 48.1662957468 45.7405998639 105% => OK
Elegance: 1.11016949153 1.45489161554 76% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.258851353803 0.300154397459 86% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0860014836609 0.103427244359 83% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0731325998941 0.0752933317313 97% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.467297998646 0.497263757937 94% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.101602412755 0.151897553556 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0928984356463 0.114077575197 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0532280550087 0.0781384742642 68% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.313306018128 0.336927656856 93% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0975720260809 0.067059652881 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.175478064581 0.210909579961 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.040652429913 0.0618886996521 66% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8870967742 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 13.0 3.86379928315 336% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.91756272401 41% => OK
Positive topic words: 8.0 8.42114695341 95% => OK
Negative topic words: 12.0 2.4623655914 487% => Less negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 2.0 2.75985663082 72% => OK
Total topic words: 22.0 13.6433691756 161% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 65.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 19.5 Out of 30
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.