Many people visit museums when they travel to new places. Why do you think people visit museums? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer
When it is to the issue why people tend to visit museum when they travel to a new place, surly; every one can have its own purposes. According to my experience and observation, people like to go to museums because they can gain more knowledge, and also they can fill their spare time. In addition, the museum can be inspiration for you, and make you smarter.
First and the most important reason is that the main aim of museum is to help people to expand their information about past and present. The main purpose of museum is to collect, preserve, interpret, and display historic and artificial, for expanding knowledge. I think that a small example give some light on this matter. Three years a go, I traveled to China, which is one of great country in Asia. On second days of my travel, I decided to visit local museum, which was located in small town. The museums helped me to change my mind about this country, because I saw there Chinese have an outstanding and people admire their scientist. However, before my travel to this country, I think that Chinese are wild people, who almost were in the war with their neighbor countries.
A further point we must consider is that you can see the museum as an entertainment. As we all know, people like to travel to others countries in order to have more joy times. Hence, the museums are the best option to spend some their travel time to visit there. In fact, if you like art and history, there is a thing that can capture your attention. Furthermore, in museums you can have access various art and science activities such as the yoga class, astronomy class, or even poetry class. So, these activities can keep you busy and out of reality for some hours.
Apart from point I made above, the museums can inspire and make you smarter. I think that there is not a better example than New York Scientist Museum. The main goal of establishing this museum is to build connection between student and the science world. There students can become familiar with biography of many great scientist, which changed the world with their findings. Indeed, these kinds of museum assist students to think critically, do not accept nothing unless it bases on logic.
All above evidence supports this fact that visiting the museum is a best selection when you go to the new place. It increases your knowledge, and makes enjoy time, and even can make you smarter. Last but not least, I hope that parents encourage their children to visit museums, which change their attitude toward the real world.
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'first', 'furthermore', 'hence', 'however', 'if', 'second', 'so', 'apart from', 'i think', 'in addition', 'in fact', 'such as']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.238095238095 0.229887763892 104% => OK
Verbs: 0.146825396825 0.158761421928 92% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0734126984127 0.0866891130778 85% => OK
Adverbs: 0.031746031746 0.046263068375 69% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0813492063492 0.0685040099705 119% => OK
Prepositions: 0.0992063492063 0.118717715034 84% => OK
Participles: 0.00992063492063 0.0351676179071 28% => Some participles wanted.
Conjunctions: 2.39215707928 2.67179642975 90% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0436507936508 0.0309702414327 141% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00188951952338 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0793650793651 0.0887237588012 89% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0238095238095 0.0209618222197 114% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0198412698413 0.0139019557991 143% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2542.0 2387.08602151 106% => OK
No of words: 446.0 408.028673835 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.69955156951 5.86048508987 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.5955099915 4.48200974243 103% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.320627802691 0.338922669872 95% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.204035874439 0.251872472559 81% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.127802690583 0.174417080927 73% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0784753363229 0.112833075102 70% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39215707928 2.67179642975 90% => OK
Unique words: 233.0 212.727598566 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.522421524664 0.524397521467 100% => OK
Word variations: 60.3143362145 59.2087087015 102% => OK
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6684587814 116% => OK
Sentence length: 18.5833333333 20.5533526081 90% => OK
Sentence length SD: 27.2675784281 48.84282405 56% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.916666667 120.699889404 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5833333333 20.5533526081 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.583333333333 0.644075263715 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.5376344086 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.54480286738 54% => OK
Readability: 38.9869207773 45.7405998639 85% => OK
Elegance: 1.3358778626 1.45489161554 92% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.31686099404 0.300154397459 106% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.089806508416 0.103427244359 87% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0706331938828 0.0752933317313 94% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.460854490727 0.497263757937 93% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.107867817256 0.151897553556 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10901074981 0.114077575197 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.072921429115 0.0781384742642 93% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.328774293403 0.336927656856 98% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0317880842632 0.067059652881 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.221613781003 0.210909579961 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0774945100067 0.0618886996521 125% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8870967742 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.86379928315 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.91756272401 122% => OK
Positive topic words: 13.0 8.42114695341 154% => OK
Negative topic words: 2.0 2.4623655914 81% => OK
Neutral topic words: 3.0 2.75985663082 109% => OK
Total topic words: 18.0 13.6433691756 132% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 86.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 26.0 Out of 30
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.