Many people visit museums when they travel to new places. Why do you think people visit museums? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
When it comes to the issue the best place for visiting when you travel to other countries, some people believe that the museum surely is their selection for filling their time. However, others have the opposite view and think that visiting the museum is not anything but waste a time. As far as I am concerned, the former point carries more weight. I take this position on account for the following reasons.
First and the most important reason is that the museum increases their knowledge about the place and people who live there. In a country may have many kinds of museums such as art museums, history museum, or scientist museum that main aim of all of them is to collect, preserve, interpret, and show items of artistic, culture of scientific achievements for diffusion knowledge. I think that a small example can give some light on this matter. When I was travel to other city like Chinese, the one of the places I like to see is that Local Chinese History Museum, which lets me to have more information about past people, empires, and important events had significant effects on this country. So, the biggest advantage of the museum lies in the fact that enhances our knowledge about local people and their customs.
A further point we must consider is that we can fill our spare time with going to a museum. If you have interest in art and history, there are some things, which can catch your attention. In this way, the museum is a good option for having a joy time and getting away from the real world and its pressure and being relaxed. In addition, there are many activities like poetry classes, yoga classes, or even sign books. Hence, not only you can spend their time in the museum but also can you gain some skills.
Apart from points I made above, the museum can help us to being smarter and have firm knowledge about the world. The museum can help us to gain new idea and perspective about the world. For example, the New York science museum aims to create partnership between schools institutions, and proper students for living in the real world. Moreover, this museum allows students to be familiar with great scientists’ life and their achievements, which can inspire students to improve their thinking. Generally, it is nearly impossible to exit a museum without any inspiration or insight.
All above evidence supports this undeniable fact that the museum increases our knowledge, fills our spare time, and makes us smarter. Although some people may do not like to visit the museum, I suggest that it would be better to go to there, even though for once.
Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'first', 'hence', 'however', 'if', 'may', 'moreover', 'so', 'apart from', 'for example', 'i think', 'in addition', 'such as']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.249011857708 0.229887763892 108% => OK
Verbs: 0.140316205534 0.158761421928 88% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0731225296443 0.0866891130778 84% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0434782608696 0.046263068375 94% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0671936758893 0.0685040099705 98% => OK
Prepositions: 0.108695652174 0.118717715034 92% => OK
Participles: 0.0197628458498 0.0351676179071 56% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.44149038812 2.67179642975 91% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0316205533597 0.0309702414327 102% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00188951952338 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.096837944664 0.0887237588012 109% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0237154150198 0.0209618222197 113% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0138339920949 0.0139019557991 100% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2594.0 2387.08602151 109% => OK
No of words: 451.0 408.028673835 111% => OK
Chars per words: 5.75166297118 5.86048508987 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.60833598836 4.48200974243 103% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.319290465632 0.338922669872 94% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.221729490022 0.251872472559 88% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.150776053215 0.174417080927 86% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0820399113082 0.112833075102 73% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44149038812 2.67179642975 91% => OK
Unique words: 237.0 212.727598566 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.525498891353 0.524397521467 100% => OK
Word variations: 61.0551446903 59.2087087015 103% => OK
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6684587814 102% => OK
Sentence length: 21.4761904762 20.5533526081 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.2092858006 48.84282405 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.523809524 120.699889404 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4761904762 20.5533526081 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.666666666667 0.644075263715 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.5376344086 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.54480286738 0% => OK
Readability: 43.6491394784 45.7405998639 95% => OK
Elegance: 1.50393700787 1.45489161554 103% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.191628578739 0.300154397459 64% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0903448528858 0.103427244359 87% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.096576084983 0.0752933317313 128% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.516001584517 0.497263757937 104% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.137445500197 0.151897553556 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0688468169256 0.114077575197 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0510713127708 0.0781384742642 65% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.344855366115 0.336927656856 102% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.039512535519 0.067059652881 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126040130478 0.210909579961 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0289298108608 0.0618886996521 47% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8870967742 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.86379928315 52% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.91756272401 81% => OK
Positive topic words: 11.0 8.42114695341 131% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 2.4623655914 41% => OK
Neutral topic words: 3.0 2.75985663082 109% => OK
Total topic words: 15.0 13.6433691756 110% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 83.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 25.0 Out of 30
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.