Many students choose to attend schools or universities outside their home countries. Why do some students study abroad? Use specific reasons and details to explain your answer.
Usually young people want to enjoy their life, having new challenges and experiences, and one effective way of getting all these things is, in my opinion going to study abroad. Going abroad they will have different life experience, more prestigious universities and sometimes they will learn a different language.
Firstly, usually young people are eager to have new experiences. However, this necessity can be expressed in several ways, but certainly one of them is going to study abroad. Moreover, changing your home country assures people a big change not only from an academic point of view, but from a personal view as well. For example, I remember that when I graduated from university in Chile, I was looking for a new experience, so I went to Spain to study a master degree, and It was exactly the change that I was looking for.
Secondly, searching for prestigious universities. It is not a secret that top tier universities are located in a reduced number of countries, therefore, if young students want to be at the top of knowledge, then they should be willing for going abroad. Hence, in my opinion the academic performance of the universities represent another reason for going overseas. For instance, taking my example, I choose the university based on academic reason, because University of Zaragoza was ranked 6th in the world for Renewable energy studies.
Thirdly, a new language could represent an additional challenge for students. In addition, this is a very powerful reason for studying in a different country. In these days where the globalization rewards those who can speak different languages, it is not strange that a bulk of student are looking for countries that offers this possibility. For example, recently I had the chance of studying abroad within my MBA program, and I choose an English speaking country, in order to improve my English skills.
To conclude, young people want to live new adventures in their lives, not only from an academic point of view, but from a personal view as well. Moreover, they are searching for academic excellence and the opportunity of learning a new language. One alternative that provide a mix of all the reason mentioned above is going to study abroad.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, hence, however, if, look, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, third, thirdly, well, for example, for instance, in addition, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 43.0788530466 84% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 52.1666666667 82% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1862.0 1977.66487455 94% => OK
No of words: 370.0 407.700716846 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.03243243243 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38581623665 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84746885667 2.67179642975 107% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 212.727598566 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.497297297297 0.524837075471 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 592.2 618.680645161 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.994623655914 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 1.86738351254 321% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.4948185118 48.9658058833 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.529411765 100.406767564 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7647058824 20.6045352989 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0588235294 5.45110844103 185% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.139633030452 0.236089414692 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0476178263041 0.076458572812 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0340360591466 0.0737576698707 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0823608721589 0.150856017488 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0233904704283 0.0645574589148 36% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 11.7677419355 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 58.1214874552 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 10.9000537634 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.96 8.01818996416 99% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 86.8835125448 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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