Our past experiences shape the way we look at people and the world around us.
What are the some of the experiences that have shaped you Outlook and the way you live now?
Use specific examples to support your answer.
Past experiences are one of the most crucial factor affecting our life and mind throughout life. However, some of them are stunning experiences and some of them are abysmal experiences. Thus, my way of thinking has been shaped thank to my past experiences such as I had unresponsible home mates, I realize that many people, actually, aren’t as they look like and health is the most significant issue in life.
Initially, people has a tremendous role in our life. I provided it to myself when I had unresponsible homemate in university. They would be the worst choice to be homemade altough we were close friends. Since I trust them in terms of responsibilities and honesty, I accept to share the home with them. However, after that year, it was quite clear to realize that people must be known and examined well before commencing a relation espacially if it is about being homemate. My opinion about my friends and relations totally has changed. Because of this abysmal experience, it was too difficult to bank on a person anymore.
Moreover, I believe that people aren’t the real ones that they expose to us. After they find out a convenience moment, they quickly commence to alter their personilaty. Since they desire to create a stunning profile in our mind, they, actually, make role play. For example, it was my high school years and we were learning math. Our perfect math teacher was always expressing that how she is a stunning teacher and her ability to math problems. Nevertheless, soon, it is appeared that she could not afford to solve any problem we asked herself. Even this was supposed to be a shame for her, she still tried to be a hero by propagating herself. Therefore, for all intents and purposes, someone doesn’t prove to be counted on at first since it is easy to behave like what is best. That is what I apply while I meet a person for the first time.
Finally, actually most importantly, health proved itself as the most crucial feature when my mother was really sick last year. Before experiencing that, we just lived how we wanted. However, things changed sharply and we commenced to appriciated to be healthy after we suffered my mother’s illness. After that abysmal experience we had, our way of living changed and we think now, firstly, our health if w edecide to do an action.
On the whole, life is teaching us how to shape our life by giving examples to live. My bad homemates, fake people I met before and my mother’s illness are the factors influenced my way of thinking.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, finally, first, firstly, however, if, look, moreover, nevertheless, really, so, still, therefore, thus, well, while, as to, for example, such as, on the whole
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 29.0 15.1003584229 192% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 77.0 43.0788530466 179% => OK
Preposition: 58.0 52.1666666667 111% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2106.0 1977.66487455 106% => OK
No of words: 439.0 407.700716846 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.79726651481 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.57737117129 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77103480311 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 241.0 212.727598566 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.548974943052 0.524837075471 105% => OK
syllable_count: 667.8 618.680645161 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 19.0 9.59856630824 198% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.994623655914 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 3.51792114695 199% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.94265232975 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.6003584229 121% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.020962639 48.9658058833 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.24 100.406767564 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.56 20.6045352989 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.72 5.45110844103 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.185788583408 0.236089414692 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0497910170981 0.076458572812 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0564323988486 0.0737576698707 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115676587857 0.150856017488 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0593587377491 0.0645574589148 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 11.7677419355 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 58.1214874552 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.26 10.9000537634 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.08 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 86.8835125448 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 83.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 25.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.