People attend college or university for many different reasons (for example, new experiences, career preparation, increased knowledge). Why do you think people attend college or university? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Nowadays, in the world of fast developing technology and science, life has becoming very complicated, and it is crucial to have reliable tools to succeed in it. Personally, I think that people attend college or university for a reason of building a career. There are a few reasons why I feel this way.
One of the reasons is that having a career enables people to ensure the stable future. Education gives people a profession, which will bring them revenue during all life. For example, having professions such as doctor or pharmacist guarantee high level of income to people, who belong to them. It is not secret that even if a pharmacist works part-time jibe, he makes enough money to completely satisfy his demands. Although some people might say, that it is the most important for a job to be enjoyable, almost everyone considers the level of salary when choosing a career. To that end, choosing of a good career provides people with poor less life.
Another reason is that people who have advanced career are satisfied with themselves. People experience astonishing filling of proud when they understand that they are on the top. Advancing through the ranks of a company brings a myriad of positive emotions and self-sufficiency. From the other hand, when a person did not attain any growth in life, it can make him fill purposeless and unsuccessful. Even if some individuals enjoy working in the same position throughout all life, the majority feel more happy when they progress. Because of this, people attend the universities and spend years on education in order to excel.
To sum it up, I feel that people are willing to gain education in college or university mostly in desire to evolve a career. This is because, the career let them to have stable income and to be proud of their achievements. All things considered it is reasonable to assume that having a career makes life more secure and pleasant.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, for example, i feel, i think, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.0286738351 145% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 43.0788530466 77% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 52.1666666667 81% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1593.0 1977.66487455 81% => OK
No of words: 327.0 407.700716846 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.87155963303 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25242769721 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73147409366 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 212.727598566 86% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.562691131498 0.524837075471 107% => OK
syllable_count: 511.2 618.680645161 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Interrogative: 2.0 0.994623655914 201% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 27.7406418433 48.9658058833 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 88.5 100.406767564 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1666666667 20.6045352989 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.5 5.45110844103 46% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.262507769512 0.236089414692 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0941935760348 0.076458572812 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.119901266071 0.0737576698707 163% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.180281698671 0.150856017488 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0697417495263 0.0645574589148 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 11.7677419355 90% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 58.1214874552 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.67 10.9000537634 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.91 8.01818996416 99% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 86.8835125448 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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