A person you know is planning to move to your town or city. What do you think this person would like and dislike about living in your town or city?
It goes without saying that in such a sophisticated world vast majorities of people bend over backwards to live in a place where they feel comfort. It is undeniable that the place where people live has significant and outstanding effects on their lives. Bearing this fact in mind a question that is a matter of debate a controversial one is what items people who are supposed to live in our city like and dislike. Agreement is yet to be reached on this issue; however, I am personally on the belief that every human being has its own interest when it comes to living in a new city. In the following paragraph, I will pinpoint the most outstanding reasons.
One compelling reason, lending credence to the stance taken above is that in all around the globe every city has different specific potentials and characteristics, which may someone like or dislike. Scientifically speaking, vast majorities of town like my town are historically noticeable, which make it enticing to discover. In fact, although my city with the advent of new technologies improved, there are many historical tissue and old fashion house or more important museum that government save and restore them. Delving further into the issue reveal that not only can everyone benefits from those historical places and museum but also can get acquaintance with the traditional and customs of ancestral. Indeed, crowds of old materials are exhibited in the museums, which represent the history of my town. In addition, many people in my city like history and people who come in to my city can share their idea and gain valuable information, which not only will provide an opportunity for new people to get familiar with my people and different culture but also will enjoy from traveling in my town. A noteworthy refreshingly intelligible statistic revealed by recent social research conducted in our country; show that a plethora of people who come in to my city definitely enjoy visiting prehistoric places and museum, which patronize them attain extremely useful information about history of my city.
Another reason that is equally important if not more is that due to the technological advancement, my city developed day in day out. Broadly speaking, nowadays new technology has penetrated every single facet of our lives especially in my city. As a matter of fact this improvement bring heavy traffic congestion, which not only do increase the amount of pollution but also prevent people from leading a healthy lifestyle. To put it in other word, myriads of people who have traveled into my town have complained about this situation and hardly ever can this condition be appealing to the new comers. However, what I alluded to above cannot be overgeneralized to all contexts. Alongside with the innumerable benefits it has, indisputably, maybe people who visit my town do not interested in history or even problem related to the town. Maybe they like or dislike different realm such as science or new method for constructions. Nevertheless, it does not make those preceding benefits pale.
To wrap it up, there are various items in my hometown, which may new travelers like or dislike. Contemplating all the aforementioned reason one soon realize that my city is provided with valuable historical places and museum, which can absorb new people owing to the fact they can gain many extra information about prehistoric events in my town. In addition, it's for sure that new people will certainly dislike the pollution caused by heavy traffic.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 472, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'museums'?
Suggestion: museums
...and old fashion house or more important museum that government save and restore them. ...
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Line 7, column 287, Rule ID: MANY_NN_U[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun information seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'much extra information', 'a good deal of extra information'.
Suggestion: much extra information; a good deal of extra information
... people owing to the fact they can gain many extra information about prehistoric events in my town. In...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'however', 'if', 'may', 'nevertheless', 'so', 'broadly speaking', 'in addition', 'in fact', 'such as', 'as a matter of fact']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.223101265823 0.229887763892 97% => OK
Verbs: 0.155063291139 0.158761421928 98% => OK
Adjectives: 0.101265822785 0.0866891130778 117% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0617088607595 0.046263068375 133% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0617088607595 0.0685040099705 90% => OK
Prepositions: 0.123417721519 0.118717715034 104% => OK
Participles: 0.0522151898734 0.0351676179071 148% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.88640429338 2.67179642975 108% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0268987341772 0.0309702414327 87% => OK
Particles: 0.00158227848101 0.00188951952338 84% => OK
Determiners: 0.0680379746835 0.0887237588012 77% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0205696202532 0.0209618222197 98% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0348101265823 0.0139019557991 250% => Maybe 'Which' is overused. If other WH_determiners like 'Who, What, Whom, Whose...' are used too in sentences, then there are no issues.
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 3513.0 2387.08602151 147% => OK
No of words: 581.0 408.028673835 142% => OK
Chars per words: 6.04647160069 5.86048508987 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.90957651803 4.48200974243 110% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.347676419966 0.338922669872 103% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.268502581756 0.251872472559 107% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.203098106713 0.174417080927 116% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.146299483649 0.112833075102 130% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88640429338 2.67179642975 108% => OK
Unique words: 280.0 212.727598566 132% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.481927710843 0.524397521467 92% => OK
Word variations: 58.6209745186 59.2087087015 99% => OK
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6684587814 111% => OK
Sentence length: 25.2608695652 20.5533526081 123% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.4668699077 48.84282405 132% => OK
Chars per sentence: 152.739130435 120.699889404 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.2608695652 20.5533526081 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.521739130435 0.644075263715 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.5376344086 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.54480286738 36% => OK
Readability: 52.1111277408 45.7405998639 114% => OK
Elegance: 1.43181818182 1.45489161554 98% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.266451129304 0.300154397459 89% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0985595385962 0.103427244359 95% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0665252428743 0.0752933317313 88% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.455246697526 0.497263757937 92% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.135718888352 0.151897553556 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103735092229 0.114077575197 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0592633936057 0.0781384742642 76% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.420841735727 0.336927656856 125% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0571746886292 0.067059652881 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.2041962229 0.210909579961 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0280296543167 0.0618886996521 45% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8870967742 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.86379928315 129% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.91756272401 61% => OK
Positive topic words: 14.0 8.42114695341 166% => OK
Negative topic words: 5.0 2.4623655914 203% => OK
Neutral topic words: 1.0 2.75985663082 36% => OK
Total topic words: 20.0 13.6433691756 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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