Should children spend most time playing and studying, or they should be required to help the family with household chores, like cooking and cleaning?
Childhood is commonly recognized as a golden period in one’s life. Worry-free and innocent children should have the right to play and study. However, some people believe it is vital for children to do household chores. From my point of view, children should help their family do household chores.
To begin with, children can attain some practical skills by doing household chores. The most fundamental household duties may include washing dishes, feeding pets, watering flowers, and so forth. These household chores are easy to perform while they will bring tremendous benefits to children. While children are doing household chores, they will naturally understand that happiness is based on hard working and laziness is a bad habit. Therefore, the ability to do housework should be developed as early as possible.
Moreover, when all family members are doing household duties together, the relationships between parents and children will be remarkably strengthened. For example, when my 8 years old cousin, Lily, does some housework with her parents, they will talk about things which they do not mention often, like Lily’s school life, where to go for the summer vocation , etc. Spending time doing household chores with her parents will help her learn to respect her parents’ hard work in the future and become more considerate than before.
Admittedly, children can gain something necessary by playing and study. However, should children spend most their time playing and studying? As far as I am concerned, a strong sense of responsibility is quite essential for children, and it can be obtained not only by playing and studying, but also by doing household chores with family. To illustrate, when children do household chores, they have to focus on one thing and finish it on time, or they will be punished. Consequently, children have to take the responsibility for what they did. Therefore, children archive a good sense of responsibility gradually.
All in all, children can benefit in many aspects by doing household chores.
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'consequently', 'however', 'if', 'may', 'moreover', 'so', 'then', 'therefore', 'while', 'for example', 'to begin with']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.247395833333 0.229887763892 108% => OK
Verbs: 0.171875 0.158761421928 108% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0625 0.0866891130778 72% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0651041666667 0.046263068375 141% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0494791666667 0.0685040099705 72% => OK
Prepositions: 0.0885416666667 0.118717715034 75% => OK
Participles: 0.0494791666667 0.0351676179071 141% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.80176069521 2.67179642975 105% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0286458333333 0.0309702414327 92% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00188951952338 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0494791666667 0.0887237588012 56% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0390625 0.0209618222197 186% => Less modal verbs wanted (like 'must , shall , will , should , would , can , could , may , and might').
WH_determiners: 0.015625 0.0139019557991 112% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2062.0 2387.08602151 86% => OK
No of words: 327.0 408.028673835 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.30581039755 5.86048508987 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25242769721 4.48200974243 95% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.406727828746 0.338922669872 120% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.321100917431 0.251872472559 127% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.232415902141 0.174417080927 133% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.155963302752 0.112833075102 138% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80176069521 2.67179642975 105% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 212.727598566 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.559633027523 0.524397521467 107% => OK
Word variations: 60.6010662356 59.2087087015 102% => OK
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6684587814 92% => OK
Sentence length: 17.2105263158 20.5533526081 84% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.5717752957 48.84282405 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.526315789 120.699889404 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2105263158 20.5533526081 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.684210526316 0.644075263715 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.5376344086 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.54480286738 72% => OK
Readability: 49.3206180589 45.7405998639 108% => OK
Elegance: 1.34545454545 1.45489161554 92% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.480113384565 0.300154397459 160% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0937863508179 0.103427244359 91% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0717533703483 0.0752933317313 95% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.50453528716 0.497263757937 101% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.156043153435 0.151897553556 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.165157210074 0.114077575197 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0968831231494 0.0781384742642 124% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.250559431408 0.336927656856 74% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0663670649993 0.067059652881 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.270330522043 0.210909579961 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.120576504359 0.0618886996521 195% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8870967742 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.86379928315 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.91756272401 81% => OK
Positive topic words: 9.0 8.42114695341 107% => OK
Negative topic words: 3.0 2.4623655914 122% => OK
Neutral topic words: 2.0 2.75985663082 72% => OK
Total topic words: 14.0 13.6433691756 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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