Some people believe that the best way of learning about life is by listening to the advice of family and friends. Other people believe that the best way of learning about life is through personal experience. Which do you prefer?
Learning is the act of acquiring new, modifying and reinforcing, skills or preferences and may involve synthesizing different type of information. It does not happen all at once, but built upon and is shaped by previous knowledge. Learning may view as a process, rather than a collection of factual and procedural knowledge. Bearing this fact in mind a question that is a matter of debate a controversial one, is whether people can take advantages of listening to the advice of family and friends or rely on their own experiences. Agreement is yet to be reached on this issue; however, I am personally on the belief that people regardless of their level of education are not enough experienced to learn individually without recommends of others. In the following paragraph, I will pinpoint the most outstanding reasons.
One compelling reason, lending credence to the stance taken above is that in today's hectic world, there are extensive trials and tribulations that penetrated in life, which people may not face completely. Scientifically speaking, in order to rely on ourselves we should experience everything in every single facet of our lives. Not only are not people experienced but also are not able to attain enough knowledge and learn day in day out. In fact, it is not possible for us to experience everything. Delving further into the issue reveals that members of families or even friends are the best sources in order to take advantage of their experience and advice. Actually, when people want to make a sound decision, they should consult with learned people and evaluate all of positive and negative aspects of decision because some consequences will not come to their mind in the spur of the moment. Indeed, hardly ever can people benefits from their own experiences. A noteworthy refreshingly intelligible statistic, revealed by a recent social research conducted in our country; show that people who relied on their own decision have faced more difficulties and less success than the others who consult and follow different kinds of view.
Another reason that is equally important if not more is that although advice of learned people may be fallacious, at least people can trust themselves and improve their self-confident if they make decision based on variety of views. Broadly speaking, personal experiences will not provide fertile ground for people learn extensively. To put it in other word, not only will not people be able to benefits from their own experiences but also make a bad decision may have negative effects on the rest of their life. However, what I alluded to above cannot overgeneralized to all contexts. Alongside with the innumerable benefits it has, indisputably, crowds of people have an ability to identify the best way to learn when they rely on their own knowledge because of their self-esteem. Nevertheless, it does not make those preceding benefits pale.
To wrap it up, people in order to learn effectively need to be informed, even by own knowledge or advice of others like members of families. Contemplating all the aforementioned reasons one soon realize that recommends of other people play a pivotal role in people lives due to the fact that it provides an opportunity for people to make a sound decision based on view of learned people. In addition, people will be able to enhance their self- confident and think meticulously. I highly suggest that people should take advantages of other people's advice in order to avoid making bad decision. If people do not reverse such a trend, we will soon witness myriads of obstacles in their lives.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to people'
Suggestion: to people
...ision, they should consult with learned people and evaluate all of positive and negati...
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Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to people'
Suggestion: to people
...more is that although advice of learned people may be fallacious, at least people can ...
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Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to people'
Suggestion: to people
...sound decision based on view of learned people. In addition, people will be able to en...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ss myriads of obstacles in their lives.
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Discourse Markers used:
['actually', 'also', 'but', 'however', 'if', 'may', 'nevertheless', 'so', 'at least', 'broadly speaking', 'in addition', 'in fact']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.226502311248 0.229887763892 99% => OK
Verbs: 0.158705701079 0.158761421928 100% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0847457627119 0.0866891130778 98% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0785824345146 0.046263068375 170% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0523882896764 0.0685040099705 76% => OK
Prepositions: 0.135593220339 0.118717715034 114% => OK
Participles: 0.0369799691834 0.0351676179071 105% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.90033091537 2.67179642975 109% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0354391371341 0.0309702414327 114% => OK
Particles: 0.00308166409861 0.00188951952338 163% => OK
Determiners: 0.060092449923 0.0887237588012 68% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0277349768875 0.0209618222197 132% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0138674884438 0.0139019557991 100% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 3608.0 2387.08602151 151% => OK
No of words: 594.0 408.028673835 146% => OK
Chars per words: 6.07407407407 5.86048508987 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.93681225224 4.48200974243 110% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.380471380471 0.338922669872 112% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.276094276094 0.251872472559 110% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.193602693603 0.174417080927 111% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.139730639731 0.112833075102 124% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90033091537 2.67179642975 109% => OK
Unique words: 289.0 212.727598566 136% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.486531986532 0.524397521467 93% => OK
Word variations: 59.7568409272 59.2087087015 101% => OK
How many sentences: 25.0 20.6684587814 121% => OK
Sentence length: 23.76 20.5533526081 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.7193819501 48.84282405 133% => OK
Chars per sentence: 144.32 120.699889404 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.76 20.5533526081 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.48 0.644075263715 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.5376344086 88% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.54480286738 72% => OK
Readability: 51.3694276094 45.7405998639 112% => OK
Elegance: 1.37765957447 1.45489161554 95% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.421629550795 0.300154397459 140% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0788774695715 0.103427244359 76% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0461245795603 0.0752933317313 61% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.464905182948 0.497263757937 93% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.152714365168 0.151897553556 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.146110245555 0.114077575197 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0895419391331 0.0781384742642 115% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.521564285197 0.336927656856 155% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.00406370079369 0.067059652881 6% => Paragraphs are so close to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.316097740911 0.210909579961 150% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0448598085367 0.0618886996521 72% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8870967742 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.86379928315 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.91756272401 163% => OK
Positive topic words: 14.0 8.42114695341 166% => OK
Negative topic words: 3.0 2.4623655914 122% => OK
Neutral topic words: 4.0 2.75985663082 145% => OK
Total topic words: 21.0 13.6433691756 154% => OK
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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