Some people believe that the Earth is being harmed (damaged) by human activity. Others feel that human activity makes the Earth a better place to live. What is your opinion? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Human has made many revolutionary changes on the Earth according to make a better place to live. Even though their invention has given them a modern and easy life, most of their activities have damaged the Earth seriously. According to my opinion, the Earth is being harmed by human activities because of following reasons.
To begin with, some of the human activities release greenhouse gases to the environment. These cause the global warming in the Earth. Because these gases absorbs by the atmosphere, our planet is heated up. These processes affect the Earth dangerously. For example, when t...
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