Some people believe that the Earth is being harmed (damaged) by human activity. Others feel that human activity makes the Earth a better place to live. What is your opinion? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Without a shadow of a doubt, human activities have some effects on earth. Some people believe that human activities make the earth a better place to live; others would disagree. In my opinion, humans try to make the earth a better place to live for themselves but they make it worth not just for themselves, but for all the creatures that live on their planet for two reasons.
First and foremost, humans activities such as building large factories and producing a lot of automobiles caused the emission of pollutant gases which definitely polluted the air. The factories need water to make their systems cooler and they enter some chemical substance to the oceans by these activities. Last year they reported that human activities have caused that hundred of animals become extinct each year. It was an awful news that made some people to think about their activities in my city. Tremendous changes have taken place in my town. Many people motivated to use public transportation but it is not enough. Solving this problem needs that all the people change their way of living.
Another reason is that men’s activities not only hurt other creatures, it also caused that lots of different diseases and problems for themselves. Todays, people are suffering from different diseases such as cancers that there is no cure for them. Polluted air and water and also some changes in the earth that human activities caused it such as the hole that is appeared in Ozon layer caused all this problem. I remember that about five years ago they said that if people continue in such a way, about a hundred years later, the Ozon layer will be destroyed and no one can live on this planet. But no one has cared and each year we hear that this condition is getting worst.
In sum, human activities not only is harmful to other creatures but also cause all the creatures on the earth to become extinct. I think the governments should invest money to solve this problem as soon as possible and before this condition becomes unsolvable. It also needs years to make the earth better place to live and these problems cannot be solved overnight.
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...that there is no cure for them. Polluted air and water and also some changes in t...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'first', 'if', 'so', 'i think', 'such as', 'in my opinion']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.246882793017 0.229887763892 107% => OK
Verbs: 0.162094763092 0.158761421928 102% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0673316708229 0.0866891130778 78% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0473815461347 0.046263068375 102% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0598503740648 0.0685040099705 87% => OK
Prepositions: 0.117206982544 0.118717715034 99% => OK
Participles: 0.0274314214464 0.0351676179071 78% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.41981521424 2.67179642975 91% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0299251870324 0.0309702414327 97% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00188951952338 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.104738154613 0.0887237588012 118% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0124688279302 0.0209618222197 59% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0124688279302 0.0139019557991 90% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2128.0 2387.08602151 89% => OK
No of words: 368.0 408.028673835 90% => OK
Chars per words: 5.78260869565 5.86048508987 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37987740619 4.48200974243 98% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.307065217391 0.338922669872 91% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.211956521739 0.251872472559 84% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.152173913043 0.174417080927 87% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.103260869565 0.112833075102 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41981521424 2.67179642975 91% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 212.727598566 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.486413043478 0.524397521467 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 51.3302746298 59.2087087015 87% => OK
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6684587814 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.4444444444 20.5533526081 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.3076985669 48.84282405 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.222222222 120.699889404 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4444444444 20.5533526081 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.444444444444 0.644075263715 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.5376344086 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.54480286738 36% => OK
Readability: 41.6400966184 45.7405998639 91% => OK
Elegance: 1.4537037037 1.45489161554 100% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.373872860526 0.300154397459 125% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.11491273235 0.103427244359 111% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0729873192214 0.0752933317313 97% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.489151997943 0.497263757937 98% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.142258045293 0.151897553556 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.145785132361 0.114077575197 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0876240944299 0.0781384742642 112% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.327468693676 0.336927656856 97% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0580761217325 0.067059652881 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.2695401667 0.210909579961 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0387327531599 0.0618886996521 63% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 11.8870967742 34% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.86379928315 259% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.91756272401 81% => OK
Positive topic words: 4.0 8.42114695341 47% => OK
Negative topic words: 10.0 2.4623655914 406% => Less negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 3.0 2.75985663082 109% => OK
Total topic words: 17.0 13.6433691756 125% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.