In modern era, the government spends money in space exploration to finding suitable planet for human living. But, funding on the space exploration rather than improvement in our planet is not good idea. In the earth, people face many problems and there solution must be required. Government should not spend money for space exploration for following reasons.
Firstly, government provides fund for research in medical fields to save number of people life. Certain kinds of diseases are severely harmed to public health. Despite spending huge money in treatment of the disease, people cannot save their life. For an example, cancer, diabetes and AIDS are severe diseases and still, today there are no medicines find for cure these diseases. Therefore, find the new life in space it is better to save human life from these harmful diseases.
Secondly, education is the cornerstone of our society and it is crucial to building the knowledge and skill of our young people. But, unfortunately, all people cannot get education because of lack of money and resources. Government should fund in building the government school and college for poor people because all people cannot afford university and school expense. In addition, new generation is future of our country, if government support to people then, they also make good ecosystem and invention new things to give better life to us.
Lastly, government also spend money on protect natural environment. Deforestation, pollution of air and noise cause detrimental impact on environment. Global warming, fluctuation in ocean current and rainfall result of increase green house gases from burning fuel, forest replace in building factories and home. If, longtime not find any solution it is destroy the human life, therefore it is better to government spend money on protect the natural environment than space exploration.
In brief, contemplating all the aforementioned reasons, spending money in education, protect the natural environment and research in medical field are more crucial than space exploration, therefore, government should not provide fund for space exploration.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 76, Rule ID: IT_IS_JJ_TO_VBG[1]
Message: Did you mean 'build'?
Suggestion: build
...one of our society and it is crucial to building the knowledge and skill of our young pe...
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Line 6, column 353, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'destroyed'.
Suggestion: destroyed
...f, longtime not find any solution it is destroy the human life, therefore it is better ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, lastly, second, secondly, so, still, then, therefore, in addition, in brief
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 11.0286738351 0% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 43.0788530466 30% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 52.1666666667 77% => OK
Nominalization: 31.0 8.0752688172 384% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1807.0 1977.66487455 91% => OK
No of words: 331.0 407.700716846 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.45921450151 4.8611393121 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26537283232 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79104375586 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 212.727598566 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.513595166163 0.524837075471 98% => OK
syllable_count: 562.5 618.680645161 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 9.59856630824 10% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.994623655914 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.0335530876 48.9658058833 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.388888889 100.406767564 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3888888889 20.6045352989 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.88888888889 5.45110844103 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.184607282305 0.236089414692 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0653720283598 0.076458572812 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0489026052143 0.0737576698707 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111309737522 0.150856017488 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0531240366011 0.0645574589148 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 11.7677419355 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 58.1214874552 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.39 10.9000537634 132% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.54 8.01818996416 107% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 86.8835125448 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 10.002688172 60% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.