In general scenarios, people will be always comfortable to do things which they know well or have some experience of doing it. Trying out new things makes everyone uncomfortable, but in my opinion, it is always important to explore new things in life. I feel this way due to several reasons which I'll explain in the following essay.
Firstly, I think humans by nature are curious species. Start from our childhood we learn new things and get introduced to surrounding world. Everything around a child is an unfamilier thing to him, but he keeps on exploring new things. he makes own learning out of these explorations. Likewise, even as grownups, we have instinct of exploration but we get too busy in following and doing old things and lost confidence to do new things or take risk. These repeated tasks also make many persons feel frustrated in their day to day jobs. Evaluating new ideas keeps the zeal for work going.
Secondly, taking risk in several areas can be financially or socially beneficial. Various scientists and businessmen have proven this fact. All the technological innovations are out come of taking risk in new dimentions of science which no one has tried earlier. Various start-ups is a very good example of how taking risk or trying new things be useful. In today's scenario, having a secure job is important factor, but some entrepenuers has tried out of the box things and succeeded in them.
In conclusion, exploring new things and taking risk has many uncertainties associated with it, but we should make our first steps towards new, because it is our natural tendency and it can lead us to success. So I personally prefer to take risk and try new things as it makes my life more meaningful.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, likewise, second, secondly, so, well, i feel, i think, in conclusion, in general, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 11.0286738351 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 29.0 43.0788530466 67% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 52.1666666667 65% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalization wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1431.0 1977.66487455 72% => OK
No of words: 296.0 407.700716846 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.83445945946 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76832289827 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 212.727598566 83% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.594594594595 0.524837075471 113% => OK
syllable_count: 432.9 618.680645161 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.994623655914 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.546405455 48.9658058833 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.1764705882 100.406767564 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4117647059 20.6045352989 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.41176470588 5.45110844103 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.259151605794 0.236089414692 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0771320372385 0.076458572812 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0789691661748 0.0737576698707 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.165116460684 0.150856017488 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0681298162675 0.0645574589148 106% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 11.7677419355 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 58.1214874552 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.44 10.9000537634 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.79 8.01818996416 97% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 86.8835125448 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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