Some people feel that sports are necessary to a college education because they teach teamwork and other valuable skills. Others feel that sports are waste of Money in college because athletes don’t learn anything useful. What do you think?

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Some people feel that sports are necessary to a college education because they teach teamwork and other valuable skills. Others feel that sports are waste of Money in college because athletes don’t learn anything useful. What do you think?

Sport is always beneficial for people especially in college ages. Altough it consumes time and money, the advantageous of it appears sharply. Thus, instead of spend my college time without sport, I prefer to do it as it provides me to bank on my mates, it teachs me to keep my ambition and sport supplies a strong and healhty body.

Initially, sport is divided into two types such as team sports and individual sports. A person member of a team, experience the team work throughout the process. Since being a member of a team provides team work, the member learns to count on the person sharing same team. Moreover, it supplies self confidence while doing the work that the team expect to be done by him as the member responsibles to complete it. By challenging with these rivals, the member improve his skills and create stunning influence on himself. Therefore, this provides him a successful life by mirroring it to life style. For instance, one of my friends in my high school, has commenced to play handball. Altough he was worse than many other students in terms of grades and economical convenience, he was hired by national handball team and made money. In addition to that he proved scholarship and additional grade while joining university.

Moreover, I strongly believe that doing sport keep emotion high and force the person doing sport to be ambitious. By having a dense ambition, working hard and desire for success comes through. The person interested in a sport, may use these ambition fort he other perspectives and areas of life. Therefore, ambition supplied from sport, becomes beneficial and useful for life. For example, in my education life, I have a lot to do. So that, I am supposed to carry out and focus on my tasks. However, I commence to lose my motivation after a while. Since doing sport keeps my motivation high, I share my 1 or 2 hours of day to doing sport. Therefore, I feel myself ready for next steps.

Finally, indeed most significantly, it is well believed that sport provides a healhty body. Nevertheless, health can goes on with sport but it can not be bought by money. Therefore, the statement of that sport is waste of money is totally abysmal and wrong. A person going on with sport, keeps him health strong.

On the whole, instead of thinking sport as a consumer of sources, we are supposed to rely on it and keep doing it. Since it provides to adapt team work, create ambition and supplies healthy body, we can have benefits by doing it.

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Average: 7 (1 vote)
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, however, if, may, moreover, nevertheless, so, therefore, thus, well, while, for example, for instance, i feel, in addition, such as, on the whole

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 13.8261648746 130% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => OK
Pronoun: 54.0 43.0788530466 125% => OK
Preposition: 61.0 52.1666666667 117% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.0752688172 211% => Less nominalization wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2062.0 1977.66487455 104% => OK
No of words: 435.0 407.700716846 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.74022988506 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.56690854021 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62855645244 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 224.0 212.727598566 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.514942528736 0.524837075471 98% => OK
syllable_count: 632.7 618.680645161 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.59856630824 146% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.994623655914 0% => OK
Article: 7.0 3.08781362007 227% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.94265232975 202% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 27.0 20.6003584229 131% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.2884276762 48.9658058833 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.3703703704 100.406767564 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.1111111111 20.6045352989 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.88888888889 5.45110844103 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 11.8709677419 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.187828671413 0.236089414692 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0542933122702 0.076458572812 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0498276161412 0.0737576698707 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115689989117 0.150856017488 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0451962375958 0.0645574589148 70% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.0 11.7677419355 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 58.1214874552 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.1575268817 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.92 10.9000537634 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.62 8.01818996416 95% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 86.8835125448 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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