Some people prefer to live in the countryside or in a small town. Others prefer to live in a big city. Which place would you prefer to live in? Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.
Living in the countryside has some advantages, such as clean environment and lack of traffic problems. However, I personally prefer to live in a big city. The reasons why I hold this stance will be elaborated in the paragraphs below.
One of the reasons is that in a big city such as Moscow, people have myriad of feasibilities to gain career growth. There are a lot of different kind of businesses in the big cities. The main offices of the majority of the biggest companies concentered there. Moreover, these offices have scores of branches as well. If a person wants to advance through the ranks of a company in a fast pace, it is better to move to a the megapolis. Although people, who live in the countryside, can progress in the career too, they need much more time to do this because most of the companies located there are small and do not have a lot of position available. To that end, big cities are the best choice to live for the individuals who want to excel.
Another reason is that life in a big city is very dynamic. There is a variety of theaters, stadiums and sport complexes to explore. Everyone there can find an activity he likes. For instance, students are young and vigorous group of people. Visiting tremendous amount of the entertaining places and meeting new people can enable them to stay busy all the time and enjoy life. If a person is up to discoveries in terms of new friends and places to look at, he can find all of this in a big city. Despite on the opinion that in the countryside people can find things to do, mostly the life in there is not so astonishing and interesting as in the megapolis. So, life in the big city is full of the fascinating moments.
To recapitulate, I feel that life in a big city is more advantageous. This is because people who live there have a lot of opportunities to succeed and are involved in myriad of marvelous activities. All things considered, it is reasonable to assume that the big city in the best place to live.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, look, moreover, so, well, for instance, i feel, kind of, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 43.0788530466 46% => OK
Preposition: 61.0 52.1666666667 117% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalization wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1627.0 1977.66487455 82% => OK
No of words: 364.0 407.700716846 89% => OK
Chars per words: 4.46978021978 4.8611393121 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.36792674256 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7184798201 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 212.727598566 83% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.483516483516 0.524837075471 92% => OK
syllable_count: 540.0 618.680645161 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.994623655914 101% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.3503927492 48.9658058833 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.4761904762 100.406767564 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3333333333 20.6045352989 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.66666666667 5.45110844103 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.230093556798 0.236089414692 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0689329743343 0.076458572812 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0879407966282 0.0737576698707 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.164640793137 0.150856017488 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0824102623829 0.0645574589148 128% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.3 11.7677419355 71% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 58.1214874552 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.35 10.9000537634 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.73 8.01818996416 96% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 86.8835125448 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 10.002688172 60% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 63.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 19.0 Out of 30
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