study foreign language in your country or in foreign country where it is spoken Learning A Foreign Language

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study foreign language in your country or in foreign country where it is spoken.

Learning A Foreign Language

According to myself I would I like to learn a foreign language in my country rather to learn in the country where it is spoken. I feel learning the foreign language in my country is very beneficial for me. There are few reasons to support my point.

First of all it will save my time if I learn the language in my country. For example I want to learn English language then I can join the English spoken class near to my location. Also I can join any online class. All these will save my time. Instead of going to any foreign country I can do it in my location. It will help to get out of to travel and live in foreign country . If I do it then I probably spend lot time may be in years which is not better option for me. Instead of I can do it same class near to my location just I have to spend 2 to 4 hours per day. It vastly save my time.

Second thing is that learning the language in my country will save my lot of money. Living in foreign country is very expensive. I have to pay for travelling ,studying and living expenses, which almost 50 times greater than spend money in my country.I have to spend very small amount to do the foreign language learning . Moreover I don't have to leave my family and job. I can manage it very well in my country. This will be not a scenario if I am doing it in abroad.

Moreover ,the advantages of this things are , I don't have to leave my country. I can live with my family.I will save more money and precise time. Which I can used for my future. Now I must have to say that If I learn the language in foreign country then I will also get some benefits like I get detail knowledge of the language. Then it will be greater chance for me to improve my language because I will get good environment to develope my skill. I get really experience to talk in foreign language Which will be more valuable.

Finally,I concluded that, I must like to learn a language in my country because it save my time and money.

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If I do it then I probably spend lot time may be in years which is not better option for me
If I do it then I probably spend lots of time, maybe in years which are not a better option for me

Sentence: It will help to get out of to travel and live in foreign country .
Description: The token of is not usually followed by an infinitival to
Suggestion: Refer to of and to

Sentence: Instead of I can do it same class near to my location just I have to spend 2 to 4 hours per day.
Description: The token of is not usually followed by a pronoun, personal, nominative, not 3rd person singular
Suggestion: Refer to of and I

the advantages of this things are ,
the advantages of this thing are ,

Which I can used for my future.
Which I can use for my future.

because it save my time and money.
because it saves my time and money.

Sentence: Then it will be greater chance for me to improve my language because I will get good environment to develope my skill.
Error: develope Suggestion: No alternate word

flaws:
No. of Grammatical Errors: 6 2
No. of Different Words: 145 200
Avg. Sentence Length: 15.44 21.0

Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 18 in 30
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 6 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 1 2
No. of Sentences: 25 15
No. of Words: 386 350
No. of Characters: 1528 1500
No. of Different Words: 145 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.432 4.7
Average Word Length: 3.959 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.233 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 93 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 70 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 35 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 9 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 15.44 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 7.419 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.56 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.433 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.546 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.161 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5

I have doubt in the following sentence
my sentence : If I do it then I probably spend lot time may be in years which is not better option for me

correct sentence by you :If I do it then I probably spend lots of time, maybe in years which are not a better option for me

I am not understand why you used are in the correct sentence? I according to me. I am talking about only one option so I used "is" .

All these correct sentences are done by you or any software.