Successful people try new things and take risks rather than only doing what they know how to do well.
Since the dawn of civilization, most of the successful people, which improve the life of people, were risk takers and did not afraid of failure. Some people are inclined toward the opinion that people should do a job that they do well at it, others believe that to be successful in this world, risks should be taken and new things should be tired. I personally contend that the former is more correct than the other one. I will explicate my view point through three outstanding reasons.
The first reason that supports my idea is that repeating the things we do regularly will result in depression and hopelessness therefore one that is depressed and hopeless is far from being successful in his life. As a case in point, there is a movie (which Charlie Chaplin acted in it) that shows people become robots after doing the same thing over and over. So people that do only things that they do well are likely become depressed or hopeless which decreases the chance of becoming successful in the life.
Furthermore, trying new things will enrich our experience in life which can be helpful in many aspects of work and life. To shed light on this issue, I knew a man which was manager of the one of the biggest technology companies in my country. He always complained about the first level workers that do not do their job accurate. One day he decided to join them annonumasly. At last, he discover that the problem was another thing which was related to the environment that the workers work at it. So by trying a new things, he solved the workers problem. As it can be seen, trying new things can lead to more effective and performance in work.
However, one cannot underestimate the role of happiness. According to a recent survey by Economist magazine, people that try new things have happier life, in both life and work, that others. The note worthy statistics that revealed by that survey shows that there is a 47% chance of being calmer and happier in people that change their work and try new things than others and it is no secret that a happy person has a higher chance of being successful in his life,
To make a long story short, all the aforementioned reasons lead us to the conclution that doing new things and taking risks play a significant role in becoming successful in life. Have a depressed and hopeless life can have negative effect on us but broadening our perspective and have a happy life assist us to be successful in the life. As facts are the same, all people want to be successful in their life but a few can reach that level therefore it is highly recommended to try new experience in our life and take rational risks which can help us become successful in our limited life.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: where; we
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Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'discovers'.
Suggestion: discovers
...d to join them annonumasly. At last, he discover that the problem was another thing whic...
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'thing'?
Suggestion: thing
... workers work at it. So by trying a new things, he solved the workers problem. As it c...
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'workers'' or 'worker's'?
Suggestion: workers'; worker's
...o by trying a new things, he solved the workers problem. As it can be seen, trying new ...
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Message: Did you mean 'noteworthy'?
Suggestion: noteworthy
...in both life and work, that others. The note worthy statistics that revealed by that survey...
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Line 5, column 464, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'recommended trying'.
Suggestion: recommended trying
...reach that level therefore it is highly recommended to try new experience in our life and take rat...
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'first', 'furthermore', 'however', 'if', 'so', 'therefore', 'well', 'another thing']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.216061185468 0.229887763892 94% => OK
Verbs: 0.179732313576 0.158761421928 113% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0975143403442 0.0866891130778 112% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0363288718929 0.046263068375 79% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0630975143403 0.0685040099705 92% => OK
Prepositions: 0.124282982792 0.118717715034 105% => OK
Participles: 0.0420650095602 0.0351676179071 120% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.5147293366 2.67179642975 94% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0210325047801 0.0309702414327 68% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00188951952338 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0898661567878 0.0887237588012 101% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0248565965583 0.0209618222197 119% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0248565965583 0.0139019557991 179% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2699.0 2387.08602151 113% => OK
No of words: 484.0 408.028673835 119% => OK
Chars per words: 5.57644628099 5.86048508987 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.69041575982 4.48200974243 105% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.305785123967 0.338922669872 90% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.183884297521 0.251872472559 73% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.128099173554 0.174417080927 73% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.095041322314 0.112833075102 84% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5147293366 2.67179642975 94% => OK
Unique words: 219.0 212.727598566 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.452479338843 0.524397521467 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 51.2224983989 59.2087087015 87% => OK
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6684587814 92% => OK
Sentence length: 25.4736842105 20.5533526081 124% => OK
Sentence length SD: 91.9438585779 48.84282405 188% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 142.052631579 120.699889404 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.4736842105 20.5533526081 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.473684210526 0.644075263715 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.5376344086 110% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.54480286738 108% => OK
Readability: 43.8621139626 45.7405998639 96% => OK
Elegance: 1.3698630137 1.45489161554 94% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.23285658937 0.300154397459 78% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.126196237364 0.103427244359 122% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.108334407228 0.0752933317313 144% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.534870855579 0.497263757937 108% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.197913795862 0.151897553556 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0897522342148 0.114077575197 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0674255271778 0.0781384742642 86% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.367658603721 0.336927656856 109% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0458310550567 0.067059652881 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.161209690631 0.210909579961 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0299850660895 0.0618886996521 48% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8870967742 109% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.86379928315 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.91756272401 41% => OK
Positive topic words: 11.0 8.42114695341 131% => OK
Negative topic words: 4.0 2.4623655914 162% => OK
Neutral topic words: 2.0 2.75985663082 72% => OK
Total topic words: 17.0 13.6433691756 125% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.