technology creat a single world
Some people think that with the arrival of modern technology, people become isolated from themselves. Some people think that new technology separate the family and destroy the sense of community among people. Although I understand their point of view, I have a different opinion. I believe that modern technology create a single world culture. The basis of my opinion is social, financial and personal.
From the social perspective, nowadays our world becomes a small village. In the past it was hard to us to communicate with people from other part of the world, but today it become so easy and convenient for any one to chat and talk or even work, if he lives in one continent and do the work in other continent. The new technologies facilitate our lives. For example, the Facebook , the whatsapp and the Skype. Make it easy to socialize with all people around the world. However, in the past it was so hard to talk to some one in other state. The only ways of communication was the telephone or letters, and those kinds took for ever. The new technologies create a single world and increase our social net work.
Financially, the new technology is the best way to search information and to improve the economic situation of the countries. For instance, in the past student to do their project they have to go the library and found text book. Students had to buy expensive books and text books to work on their projects. But, today after the inventions of the computer and internet, students are able to access the entire world while they are staying at home. Nowadays it becomes much easy for many companies to make deals through the internet. People are able to sell and buy products with reasonable prices. Import and export become more convenient than before, in the past companies directories had to travel to sign a contract, but today email is available and it is for all companies around the world to deal with each other. The financial situation becomes way better than in the best after the invention of technology.
Third personally, technology creates a single world. In the past I remember we had to send letter to our relative who live in America, however, today it becomes so convenient to talk to them even every day, we have webcams to see them and they see us. Other benefit from the technology is that we can buy any thing while we are staying at home for example, we just surf the internet and buy what we need from clothes to food even furniture. We do not have to drive and waste time and effort.
In conclusion, new technologies for sure create single world culture. New technology helps us to communicate with each other so we increase our social net work and become as single family. Companies become able to make good deals with each other all over the world which increase the economic value of each country. Finally each person benefit from the technology in a different way which help the whole community.
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...ase the economic value of each country. Finally each person benefit from the technology...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, however, if, so, third, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 9.8082437276 20% => OK
Conjunction : 24.0 13.8261648746 174% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 43.0 43.0788530466 100% => OK
Preposition: 78.0 52.1666666667 150% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2459.0 1977.66487455 124% => OK
No of words: 515.0 407.700716846 126% => OK
Chars per words: 4.77475728155 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.763781212 4.48103885553 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54704178994 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Unique words: 225.0 212.727598566 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.436893203883 0.524837075471 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 777.6 618.680645161 126% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.994623655914 0% => OK
Article: 8.0 3.08781362007 259% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 29.0 20.6003584229 141% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 50.7896737845 48.9658058833 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.7931034483 100.406767564 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7586206897 20.6045352989 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.93103448276 5.45110844103 54% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.5376344086 235% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 12.0 4.88709677419 246% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.300462411034 0.236089414692 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.115620752449 0.076458572812 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.198960642774 0.0737576698707 270% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.199961974157 0.150856017488 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.081686030043 0.0645574589148 127% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 11.7677419355 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 58.1214874552 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.09 10.9000537634 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.21 8.01818996416 90% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 86.8835125448 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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