Essay topics:
Tehran's air pollution
Theran is the capital of Iran and also the biggest city in the country. Its population is about 14 million and also has the most air pollution in the world. This problem has some causes, for example, the old and inequality motor vehicles and insufficient public transportation.
First, old and inequality motor vehicles, in Theran more people have old cars, old motorcycles that produce too much smoke. On the other hand, the car manufacturers produce cars with low quality.
Second, insufficient public transportation, the public transportation such as bus, subway are not everywhere and more time, and then people have to use private vehicles.
Those reasons were only two of ten reasons that make air pollution in Theran.
Votes
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, second, so, then, for example, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 15.1003584229 26% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 9.8082437276 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 11.0286738351 18% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 5.0 43.0788530466 12% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 52.1666666667 19% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 616.0 1977.66487455 31% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 118.0 407.700716846 29% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.22033898305 4.8611393121 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.29587325169 4.48103885553 74% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9145150817 2.67179642975 109% => OK
Unique words: 80.0 212.727598566 38% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.677966101695 0.524837075471 129% => OK
syllable_count: 192.6 618.680645161 31% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.59856630824 31% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.994623655914 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 20.6003584229 34% => Need more sentences, or put a space between two sentences.
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.0689576822 48.9658058833 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.0 100.406767564 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8571428571 20.6045352989 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0 5.45110844103 183% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 11.8709677419 8% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.101146261533 0.236089414692 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0518035213568 0.076458572812 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0822028755552 0.0737576698707 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0682653706677 0.150856017488 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0718688479338 0.0645574589148 111% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 11.7677419355 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 58.1214874552 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.7 10.9000537634 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.91 8.01818996416 99% => OK
difficult_words: 26.0 86.8835125448 30% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 40.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 12.0 Out of 30
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