“ In universities and colleges all knowledge are important “ Bertrand Russell one of the most brilliant mind through the history. There is no doubt that financial support is one of the hectic phenomena in every modern society. Affecting people in all walks of life considerably. The question is that, However, whether agree or disagree has sparked a spirited debate among people recently. I am, a huge extent, agree in favor of the letter standpoint. In the ensuring paragraph, I will try to shed some light in my perspective through some ample examples and conspicuous reasons.
On the one hand, It is crystal clear that library and class is important place for improve knowledge and skill. In the library it is vital for all subject may be about sports and activity so it helps student for all situation‘s student. For example, when I was student I went to library and chose resource about gym so it helps me improve my body.
On the other hand, there is no doubt that these place important for job and fine it in future due to you can read many book without spend more money or it help you learned many subject by teacher and professor.so financial in the universities is important spend for teacher and buy book and increase situation and build luxury university. As an example, I had assignment about accounting it is my major and I ‘m working today in coincided with my major. I spike my professor and he encourage and learn some way for increase grade of my assignment so if he had busy thing about money and her life he was not positive for helped me.
Finally, nobody can deny that when money spent for class and library it has very useful for society and it has benefit for society and country I want to say more about this subject. If university in one city built luxury and have positive book and good class with computer and instrument. Foreign people see in website and go to the city and spent money. This way is important and essential university can absorb many people, for example I see college poblue in Colorado spring it is amazing so I decide apply and go there and continue my university.
To make long story short, from all the above mentioned reasons and points, one can safety draw a conclusion that if one weight merits and demerits of above statement, we can soon realize that library and class are important and indispensable.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 115, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun book seems to be countable; consider using: 'many books'.
Suggestion: many books
...d fine it in future due to you can read many book without spend more money or it help you...
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Line 3, column 156, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'helps'?
Suggestion: helps
...any book without spend more money or it help you learned many subject by teacher and...
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Line 3, column 487, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'encourages'.
Suggestion: encourages
...h my major. I spike my professor and he encourage and learn some way for increase grade o...
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Line 4, column 459, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...people, for example I see college poblue in Colorado spring it is amazing so I de...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, however, if, may, so, for example, no doubt, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 32.0 13.8261648746 231% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 46.0 43.0788530466 107% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 52.1666666667 81% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1964.0 1977.66487455 99% => OK
No of words: 418.0 407.700716846 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.6985645933 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.52162009685 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61105086004 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 213.0 212.727598566 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.50956937799 0.524837075471 97% => OK
syllable_count: 639.9 618.680645161 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.994623655914 101% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.1344086022 119% => OK
Sentence length SD: 69.4516834366 48.9658058833 142% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.529411765 100.406767564 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5882352941 20.6045352989 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.17647058824 5.45110844103 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.121594179466 0.236089414692 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.041093015726 0.076458572812 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0295197773057 0.0737576698707 40% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0699085339008 0.150856017488 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00818378507034 0.0645574589148 13% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 11.7677419355 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 58.1214874552 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.28 10.9000537634 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.0 8.01818996416 100% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 86.8835125448 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.0537634409 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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