TPO-02 - Independent Writing Task Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?Always telling the truth is the most important consideration in any relationship between people.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

Telling truth in human relationships always has been a critical question. Some people believe that foundations of relationships should be based on truth and honesty but other people may say honesty and telling truth everywhere isn't a good strategy. In my opinion this completely depend on people who we relate with them. However telling truth in any relationship isn't wisely because of following reasons.
First, we should evaluate people who communicate with then decided about telling truth or not. For an example, sometimes may some unreliable people want to harm us so on that situation we shouldn't tell truth instead we should try to confuse them with false information. I express a personal experience to clear this better. Last year near my university, a man came next to me and asked me help him in carrying some book. I told him that i can't because i'm late for an important meeting.
Second, against what i mentioned above in some other situation we should tell truth and telling lie is not so good. In relationship with family and friend who are honest with us and we rely on them completely telling truth is better. Some people have good character. They try to be helpful and friendly for others so telling lie to them is not so honorable.
Finally, although telling truth is critical for having health relationship but sometimes may cause bad results. In dealing with dictators who want to dictate their ideas in our mind and determine our lifestyle according to their lifestyle telling truth isn't necessary. For an example my mom is a dictator she tried to convinced me about university selecting. After i filled my form she asked me if i select her favorable university or not. I told truth. After that she had taken back my form and add her favorable university. Finally i be forced to study in university that i didn't like if i didn't tell truth i would study in my own chosen.

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Average: 6 (1 vote)
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
...lationships should be based on truth and honesty but other people may say honesty...
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Line 1, column 229, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
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Suggestion: isn't
...ay honesty and telling truth everywhere isnt a good strategy. In my opinion this com...
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Suggestion: isn't
...wever telling truth in any relationship isnt wisely because of following reasons. ...
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...valuate people who communicate with then decided about telling truth or not. For ...
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Line 2, column 190, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
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Suggestion: shouldn't
...want to harm us so on that situation we shouldnt tell truth instead we should try to con...
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Line 2, column 439, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
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Suggestion: I
... in carrying some book. I told him that i cant because im late for an important m...
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Line 2, column 441, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...n carrying some book. I told him that i cant because im late for an important meetin...
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Line 3, column 22, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
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Suggestion: I
...mportant meeting. Second, against what i mentioned above in some other situation...
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Line 4, column 253, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
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Suggestion: isn't
...ording to their lifestyle telling truth isnt necessary. For an example my mom is a d...
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Line 4, column 365, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
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Suggestion: I
...ed me about university selecting. After i filled my form she asked me if i select...
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Suggestion: I
... After i filled my form she asked me if i select her favorable university or not....
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Suggestion: Finally,
... form and add her favorable university. Finally i be forced to study in university that...
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Line 4, column 576, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
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Suggestion: didn't
...be forced to study in university that i didnt like if i didnt tell truth i would stud...
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Line 4, column 592, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
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Suggestion: didn't
...dy in university that i didnt like if i didnt tell truth i would study in my own chos...
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Line 4, column 609, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
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Suggestion: I
...that i didnt like if i didnt tell truth i would study in my own chosen.
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'finally', 'first', 'however', 'if', 'may', 'second', 'so', 'then', 'in my opinion']

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.194915254237 0.229887763892 85% => OK
Verbs: 0.197740112994 0.158761421928 125% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0875706214689 0.0866891130778 101% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0677966101695 0.046263068375 147% => OK
Pronouns: 0.104519774011 0.0685040099705 153% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.121468926554 0.118717715034 102% => OK
Participles: 0.0508474576271 0.0351676179071 145% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.68314178197 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0282485875706 0.0309702414327 91% => OK
Particles: 0.00282485875706 0.00188951952338 150% => OK
Determiners: 0.0508474576271 0.0887237588012 57% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0225988700565 0.0209618222197 108% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0141242937853 0.0139019557991 102% => OK

Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1896.0 2387.08602151 79% => OK
No of words: 329.0 408.028673835 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.76291793313 5.86048508987 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25891501996 4.48200974243 95% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.328267477204 0.338922669872 97% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.252279635258 0.251872472559 100% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.161094224924 0.174417080927 92% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.118541033435 0.112833075102 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68314178197 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 212.727598566 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.510638297872 0.524397521467 97% => OK
Word variations: 52.8295692255 59.2087087015 89% => OK
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6684587814 97% => OK
Sentence length: 16.45 20.5533526081 80% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.8353706975 48.84282405 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.8 120.699889404 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.45 20.5533526081 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.5 0.644075263715 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.5376344086 88% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 5.54480286738 271% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 41.6779635258 45.7405998639 91% => OK
Elegance: 0.992366412214 1.45489161554 68% => OK

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.220206329902 0.300154397459 73% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0679429683544 0.103427244359 66% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0627054897636 0.0752933317313 83% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.434243290015 0.497263757937 87% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.140439194693 0.151897553556 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0788487410604 0.114077575197 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0458780938236 0.0781384742642 59% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.269286393413 0.336927656856 80% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0481872743907 0.067059652881 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.155006786866 0.210909579961 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0313256563182 0.0618886996521 51% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.

Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8870967742 109% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.86379928315 129% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.91756272401 41% => OK
Positive topic words: 8.0 8.42114695341 95% => OK
Negative topic words: 3.0 2.4623655914 122% => OK
Neutral topic words: 2.0 2.75985663082 72% => OK
Total topic words: 13.0 13.6433691756 95% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

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Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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