TPO-02 - Independent Writing Task Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?Always telling the truth is the most important consideration in any relationship between people.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

Generally speaking, I personally agree with the statement. People need the truth. Some people think that the truth is not always good for us, some people think that the truth is the truth and people have to right to know it even it is bad. I have several resaons for having that opions such as resposibility, being good friend and other reasons.

First of all, it is important to consider responsibility. In my view, the resposibility is one of most characteristic in a person. Sometime news can be hard to tell but if you are responbil person you have to say the trust. By the way of example, when I was a student in university I failed all of class before 2 years. I said the truth my family because of responsibility. It was hard to say it but my family still trust me because of my character.

In addition to the importance of responsibility, I think that people should say tell the truth in order to have good friendship. If you say people the trust people can be good friends with you. Being honest gets more close people. For instance, I have good friends in my office. Because I never say a liar. They know that i am trustable person.

Last but not least, there are other reasons why should always tell the trust. Saying true increase self confidence and self esteem. People who is trustable have strong character because it is not easy to say always the trust. Telling the truth kills two bird with a one stone. On the on hand people trust you on the other hand you trust people.

By the way of conclusion, based on the arguments explored above, I am of the opinion that people should say the truth in order to have good relationship and being a good friend. I think everbody should tell the truth. People should not fear of it.

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Average: 6 (1 vote)
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...truth in order to have good friendship. If you say people the trust people can be ...
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...ance, I have good friends in my office. Because I never say a liar. They know that i am...
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...ause I never say a liar. They know that i am trustable person. Last but not le...
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... the trust. Telling the truth kills two bird with a one stone. On the on hand people...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, so, still, for instance, i think, in addition, such as, by the way, first of all, in my view, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 38.0 43.0788530466 88% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 52.1666666667 71% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1434.0 1977.66487455 73% => OK
No of words: 320.0 407.700716846 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.48125 4.8611393121 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22948505376 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58232423168 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 212.727598566 67% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.44375 0.524837075471 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 434.7 618.680645161 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.994623655914 101% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6003584229 117% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.1344086022 65% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.8334898066 48.9658058833 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 59.75 100.406767564 60% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 13.3333333333 20.6045352989 65% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.29166666667 5.45110844103 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 20.0 11.8709677419 168% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.142525941303 0.236089414692 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0484355819571 0.076458572812 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0424008166031 0.0737576698707 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.08926301926 0.150856017488 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0240108396268 0.0645574589148 37% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.3 11.7677419355 54% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.2 58.1214874552 129% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 10.1575268817 59% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 8.11 10.9000537634 74% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.45 8.01818996416 80% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 86.8835125448 51% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.0537634409 72% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?

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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200

Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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