TPO-04 - Independent Writing Task Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?In twenty years there will be fewer cars in use than there are today.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

There are many means of transportation- bus, car, airplane, ship- in today's world. Do this means of transportation (especially car) will be reduced in up coming later 20 years? however, there, perhaps, will be increase in number of cars in future due to several reason.

From the ancient time to present time, people are migrating or moving from one place to another for several reason- for jobs, education, recreation; to ease this migration, one need a vehicle to ease their expedition. And, for many of the people, the choice of vehicle they prefer are car. For example: In my country Nepal, a survey was taken in 2000 and 2010 to assess the transportation vehicle they used; the number of people who used car increased by 15%. further for, the ministry of transportation have anticipated further increase in car in coming years.

There is, in recent years, production of car which are fuel efficient, low price, and increase in luxury. Therefore, it create a chance for further increase in chance. Furthermore, Various car company are spending an allotment in a research for further invention of advanced, luxurious and fuel efficient car. Recently, a germany car company has announced that they will bring a car who runs without fuel in 2030, leading to increasing in number of cars for further years.

People, however, argue that due to deficiency of fuel, there may be decrease in use of cars. But, this-in my opinion- is wrong because there are various research going on to make car running without fuel and those research, further, have shown a promising outcome.

Therefore, there will be not fewer number of cars in 20 years because of several reason- use of fuel efficient car, development of highly advanced car and unrelenting admiration of car by the people.

Votes
Average: 7 (1 vote)
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 11, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun means seems to be countable; consider using: 'many means'.
Suggestion: many means
There are many means of transportation- bus, car, airplane, ...
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Line 1, column 176, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: However
...be reduced in up coming later 20 years? however, there, perhaps, will be increase in nu...
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Line 1, column 253, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun reason seems to be countable; consider using: 'several reasons'.
Suggestion: several reasons
...ease in number of cars in future due to several reason. From the ancient time to present ti...
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Line 1, column 260, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... number of cars in future due to several reason. From the ancient time to pres...
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Line 3, column 101, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun reason seems to be countable; consider using: 'several reasons'.
Suggestion: several reasons
...or moving from one place to another for several reason- for jobs, education, recreation; to ea...
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Line 3, column 461, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Further
...f people who used car increased by 15%. further for, the ministry of transportation hav...
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Line 3, column 461, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: further,
...f people who used car increased by 15%. further for, the ministry of transportation hav...
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Line 5, column 121, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'creates'?
Suggestion: creates
..., and increase in luxury. Therefore, it create a chance for further increase in chance...
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Line 5, column 231, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[1]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'research'.
Suggestion: research
...ar company are spending an allotment in a research for further invention of advanced, luxu...
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Line 5, column 426, Rule ID: ADJECTIVE_IN_ATTRIBUTE[1]
Message: A more concise phrase may lose no meaning and sound more powerful.
Suggestion: increasing
...o runs without fuel in 2030, leading to increasing in number of cars for further years. People, h...
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Line 9, column 74, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun reason seems to be countable; consider using: 'several reasons'.
Suggestion: several reasons
...r number of cars in 20 years because of several reason- use of fuel efficient car, development...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, however, may, so, therefore, for example, in my opinion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 13.8261648746 43% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 43.0788530466 30% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 52.1666666667 98% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1486.0 1977.66487455 75% => OK
No of words: 298.0 407.700716846 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98657718121 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73840307535 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 212.727598566 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.536912751678 0.524837075471 102% => OK
syllable_count: 456.3 618.680645161 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 9.59856630824 21% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.994623655914 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.344902439 48.9658058833 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.142857143 100.406767564 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2857142857 20.6045352989 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.21428571429 5.45110844103 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.5376344086 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.152140188676 0.236089414692 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0649924396326 0.076458572812 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0563504000963 0.0737576698707 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110928937733 0.150856017488 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0691736384203 0.0645574589148 107% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 11.7677419355 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 58.1214874552 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 10.9000537634 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.18 8.01818996416 102% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 86.8835125448 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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