These days people always tend to choose the cheapest way to buy or do something. As same as for automobile industry, the prices are going high and people tries to travel in different ways. In my opinion, I think in twenty years there will be fewer cars in use than there are today. I feel this way for two main reasons, which I will explore in the following essay.
To begin with, increasing price of cars has become a serious problem for people. Not only cars, the price of fuel for cars has become comparatively higher than the past. So, by the time in twenty years the automobile industry will go down. My own experience will demonstrate this issue. When I was using my car to go to work, about half of my salary will be gone to fuel usage and the repair maintenance of my car. I have to refill fuel at least twice a week, and drains all my money. As prices of each product increases, the price for fuel and other maintenance for car will also increase in another twenty years.
Secondly, there is a big problem of convenience and saving time. When we travel around with a car, it takes hours to go to your destination, due to heavy traffic in the streets. Due to higher amount of vehicles around the streets, traffic congestion will happen and kills your valuable time. For example, if someone wants to go to a special occasion in time, but when you get caught up to a traffic jam, time will be a waste and you can't arrive to your destination on time. So, other than using cars to go around, there are many convenient ways to travel, such as public transport. When we use public transport, it saves up your valuable time and it is more convenient than getting stuck in a traffic jam.
In conclusion, in twenty years cars around streets will reduce and people will try easy ways to travel such as public transport. This is because it is more convenient and saves up your time, money.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 434, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...affic jam, time will be a waste and you cant arrive to your destination on time. So,...
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Line 7, column 199, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...nvenient and saves up your time, money.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, second, secondly, so, as for, at least, for example, i feel, i think, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 43.0788530466 65% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 52.1666666667 102% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1547.0 1977.66487455 78% => OK
No of words: 349.0 407.700716846 86% => OK
Chars per words: 4.43266475645 4.8611393121 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32221490584 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.38647032191 2.67179642975 89% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 212.727598566 82% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.498567335244 0.524837075471 95% => OK
syllable_count: 482.4 618.680645161 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Interrogative: 3.0 0.994623655914 302% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.01826823 48.9658058833 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.4210526316 100.406767564 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3684210526 20.6045352989 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.21052631579 5.45110844103 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 11.8709677419 25% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 12.0 4.88709677419 246% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.211883230026 0.236089414692 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0742851441861 0.076458572812 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0721000103318 0.0737576698707 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140151124355 0.150856017488 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0258016494303 0.0645574589148 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.6 11.7677419355 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 58.1214874552 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.1575268817 78% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 8.41 10.9000537634 77% => Coleman_liau_index is low.
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.75 8.01818996416 84% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 86.8835125448 56% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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