Taking a glimpse of the future is always the temptation of many people and I am one of them. If someone asks me about my imagination for the world of twenty years from now on, I believe there will be a fewer car in use than today. The use of public transportation and the development of technology will be the main factors that put car use into the past, which I will explore in the following essay.
First of all, the exponential growth of public transportation will place a pivotal role in the decrement of car use. Many developed countries that had already built their public transportation for the need of their citizens. Developing countries that do not have the public transportation will build ones of their own. By doing so, people will have the ability to choose between using their own car or the public system. The endorsement of government for public transportation will also a big factor. By increase, the tax fee for those who want to owe a car and decrease the fee for busses and trains will encourage people to switch to the public transportation. The example of high fee for a private car in Singapore is the good demonstration for this. The government of Singapore has been long known for their policy against a private car, making the price of purchasing a car out of store as much as triple the reference price. Their policy, even though seems to be harsh for individual, is beneficial for the society. They promote the use of public transportation, reduce air pollution and help Singapore become an eco-friendly country.
Secondly, the development of technology is also contributing to the reduction of car use. Nowadays, people can stay at home instead of work in their cubicle and still achieve the efficiency as before. The internet has allowed several people in their profession an opportunity to do so. My experience at IT support for a company is a good example for this. With the internet, I can do most of my computer diagnosis at home and rarely have to be in the company, unless for hardware emergency. With that said, the use of my personal vehicle is also reduced. In case that I do have to be in the company, using public transportation is my better choice, due to the convenience and economically friendly. Therefore, the advent of technology in general, or the on internet in particular, has the effect on car in use in the future.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, in fact, in general, in particular, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 43.0788530466 70% => OK
Preposition: 63.0 52.1666666667 121% => OK
Nominalization: 22.0 8.0752688172 272% => Less nominalization wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1960.0 1977.66487455 99% => OK
No of words: 416.0 407.700716846 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.71153846154 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.51620172871 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91933829107 2.67179642975 109% => OK
Unique words: 203.0 212.727598566 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.487980769231 0.524837075471 93% => OK
syllable_count: 636.3 618.680645161 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.994623655914 0% => OK
Article: 10.0 3.08781362007 324% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.2079558436 48.9658058833 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.3333333333 100.406767564 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8095238095 20.6045352989 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.2380952381 5.45110844103 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.53405017921 66% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.88709677419 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.185769119357 0.236089414692 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0636915480166 0.076458572812 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0536719336935 0.0737576698707 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.154626152837 0.150856017488 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0602396578124 0.0645574589148 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 11.7677419355 91% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.04 10.9000537634 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.69 8.01818996416 96% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 86.8835125448 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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