The advent of technology has brought people to experience life on the whole new level as compared to older generation like our grandparents. I am the opinion that life today is easier and more comfortable due to the ease of accessing information and also from the development of healthcare system. I will further explain these reasons in the following essay.
To begin with, the blooming of the internet in a mordern day has allowed us to access the wealth of mankind knowledge, which helps us to growth and develops ourself. The widespread use of internet together with reasonable cost provided people a powerful tool to get the information as fast as possible. Back in the time when our grandparent lived, if they want to know or to learn something, they have to get to the bookstore, spend hours of searching and buy a book of interested. After came back home, they have to go through the book, at least a list of content before they actually read and find the information they want. It is a long and time-consuming process as compared to the use of search engine this day. Within a few clicks away, Google return thousand of search entries, which are listed in logical and relevant fashion to our inquiry. Furthermore, online open course is also a good way to learn new things if you do not want to spend time and lots of money to attend university. The opportunity in which our grandparent have never imagined of.
Secondly, people live longer and healthier these days due to the advancement of the health care system. In the 1950s, the simple flu could cost you your life. A simple nick on your finger by a piece of metal could be fatal cause by infection. That is what I have told by my grandparent about living condition of unhygienic and filthy. In the modern day, with the advancement of technology, especially in pharmacy and medicine, people managed to live longer and healthier. Most of the fatal diseases already have the cure. The environment around us also become clean and sanitary. People have much care about their hygiene and well-being, thank the education that they can get from the internet aforementioned. All of which have made living in this world much easier and comfortable as it should be.
In conclusion, I am the opinion that young adult has a mean to live easier and comfortable as compared to their grandparents. The two main reasons are because of the ease of accessing information and the development of healthcare system that I explained above.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 6, column 523, Rule ID: NOUN_AROUND_IT[1]
Message: Consider using 'the surrounding environment'?
Suggestion: The surrounding environment
...e fatal diseases already have the cure. The environment around us also become clean and sanitary. People ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, furthermore, if, second, secondly, so, well, at least, in conclusion, on the whole, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 13.8261648746 130% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 43.0788530466 84% => OK
Preposition: 74.0 52.1666666667 142% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.0752688172 173% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2061.0 1977.66487455 104% => OK
No of words: 431.0 407.700716846 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.7819025522 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.55637350225 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77164016833 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 224.0 212.727598566 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.519721577726 0.524837075471 99% => OK
syllable_count: 645.3 618.680645161 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.994623655914 0% => OK
Article: 8.0 3.08781362007 259% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.2545843415 48.9658058833 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.6818181818 100.406767564 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5909090909 20.6045352989 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.13636363636 5.45110844103 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.136492862296 0.236089414692 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0394995946533 0.076458572812 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0375323858019 0.0737576698707 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0841408702365 0.150856017488 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0266363959794 0.0645574589148 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 11.7677419355 93% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.44 10.9000537634 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.62 8.01818996416 95% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 86.8835125448 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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