Certainly, some people if asked would agree with the statement that is better to have broad knowledge of many academic subjects than to specialize in one specific subject. While, some others have the opinion that it depends upon various factors. For example, the major which you are reseraching, the toughness of the subject, the satisfaction upon knowing the subject in deep. As far as I'm concerned, I adopt a firm position by agreeing that broad knowledge of many academic subjects is useful in the long run of life.
Broad knowledge in many streams help you to choose your career oppurtunities better. Most of the people get bored by doing the same type of work continuosly. Although the work is different, due to no disparity in the stream, they find the work boring. For example, I took my major in Electronic and Communciation Engineering. Apart from that I took my minor in Maths and Computing. I took another Audit course apart from the major on Machine Learning whIch is developing in the world rapidly. By taking various courses in differeNt streams , I could switch to different subjects whenever I get bored on one particular subject. Furthermore, I can perceive my MS program in my interested stream. If I had not taken any of the extra courses apart from,my major, I would have landed in huge trouble. In this way, having knowledge in various subjects helped me.
Most of the subjects are interrelated. One subject needs the knowledge of other. For example, Science alone is of no use as well as Maths. Maths concepts are needed in science and vice versa. For example, In Computer Networks course, most of the time we will be dealing with graph algorithms. Algorithms and data structures course which I have learned in my 1st year course helped me a lot in solving the problems as well as understanding the concept in detail. If the prerequisite course is not taken, I would have faced a lot of trouble and waste lot of my time in reading the earlier course again.In this way, having knowledge of various subjects is useful.
However, some people claim that by studying various subjects, they will be wasting a lot of time. Moreover, they claim that they don't read any subject perfectly. However, this is not the case always. Studying various subjects is not all considered as waste of time. It may be helpful to us in future. For example, NASA scientists are sending satellites into space and retrieving the information using various subjects. They have to concentrate on Aerospace subjects, Mathematics for calculations, Science for various phenomenon etc. They have to excel in every subject to send the satellites successfully.
In conclusion, due to the reasons mentioned above, it is very important to have knowledge of many academic subjects than to specialize in one specific subject. It also enhances our thinking power.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... to specialize in one specific subject. While, some others have the opinion that it d...
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... knowing the subject in deep. As far as Im concerned, I adopt a firm position by a...
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...ime in reading the earlier course again.In this way, having knowledge of various s...
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... waste of time. It may be helpful to us in future. For example, NASA scientists are sendi...
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...t to send the satellites successfully. In conclusion, due to the reasons mentio...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'furthermore', 'however', 'if', 'may', 'moreover', 'so', 'well', 'while', 'apart from', 'for example', 'in conclusion', 'as well as']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.22962962963 0.229887763892 100% => OK
Verbs: 0.157407407407 0.158761421928 99% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0962962962963 0.0866891130778 111% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0481481481481 0.046263068375 104% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0666666666667 0.0685040099705 97% => OK
Prepositions: 0.148148148148 0.118717715034 125% => OK
Participles: 0.0592592592593 0.0351676179071 169% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.78904928384 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0222222222222 0.0309702414327 72% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00188951952338 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0796296296296 0.0887237588012 90% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0148148148148 0.0209618222197 71% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00740740740741 0.0139019557991 53% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2850.0 2387.08602151 119% => OK
No of words: 481.0 408.028673835 118% => OK
Chars per words: 5.92515592516 5.86048508987 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.68313059816 4.48200974243 104% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.357588357588 0.338922669872 106% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.297297297297 0.251872472559 118% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.201663201663 0.174417080927 116% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.114345114345 0.112833075102 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78904928384 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 230.0 212.727598566 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.47817047817 0.524397521467 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 54.7267486518 59.2087087015 92% => OK
How many sentences: 31.0 20.6684587814 150% => OK
Sentence length: 15.5161290323 20.5533526081 75% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.5345975778 48.84282405 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.935483871 120.699889404 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.5161290323 20.5533526081 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.41935483871 0.644075263715 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.5376344086 110% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.54480286738 180% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 45.245858762 45.7405998639 99% => OK
Elegance: 1.60544217687 1.45489161554 110% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.39421814168 0.300154397459 131% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.121050853467 0.103427244359 117% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.092232748445 0.0752933317313 122% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.43590882887 0.497263757937 88% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.141131234525 0.151897553556 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.124547194284 0.114077575197 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.118740139342 0.0781384742642 152% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.360521355424 0.336927656856 107% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0891339120738 0.067059652881 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.293476388614 0.210909579961 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.111063991575 0.0618886996521 179% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8870967742 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.86379928315 207% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 13.0 4.91756272401 264% => Less neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 7.0 8.42114695341 83% => OK
Negative topic words: 7.0 2.4623655914 284% => OK
Neutral topic words: 5.0 2.75985663082 181% => OK
Total topic words: 19.0 13.6433691756 139% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.