TPO-16 - Independent Writing Task Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The best way to travel is in a group led by a tour guide. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

There is myriad consideration or factors that every person should take into account regarding travel by tour guide. Most of the people like to traveling new places for fun and relax. From my vantage point, I certainly agree that a person should travel is in the group led by tour guide because of easier, get deep knowledge about place, safe and enjoyable trip.
To begin with, every person wants to travel in the new place. He has not known about the every city and tourist place. Guide make an easier journey to reach the specific location. It saves money and time which is most important when we travel. For example, in new places, if the person is not hired the guide, increase the chance of going in the wrong direction ultimately, the waste money of transportation and time to find the location. Therefore, the little money spent on hiring the guide is better than trouble to reach location.
Furthermore, the person for some places is new that time if the hiring guide is a benefit to get the deep knowledge about the place and understand the culture. For instance, one year ago, I went Agra with my friends. We have not known the history about the Taj Mahal; so, we were hiring the guide for the guidance of the each place. I was really enjoyed listening the whole story behind the how to taj mahal build and what is the purpose. Besides, that is no meaning that we have not knowledge about the place which we were already traveling. I learn many things the how to ancient people were lived in a small village and cultural values.
Moreover, traveling with a guide is most safe and enjoyable journey because of if some emergency occurs I take the help of guide because of the unknown city only the guide one person to known and he is lives that city so, he knows about the city.
In conclusion, a person should hire the guide if he travels first time in the city because of it is easier to find the location, safe and enjoyable. In addition, he gets the knowledge about a specific place; mostly when traveling historical places such as the fort, monuments, and religious place.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 125, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[8]
Message: The proper name in singular (Guide) must be used with a third-person verb: 'makes'.
Suggestion: makes
...the every city and tourist place. Guide make an easier journey to reach the specific...
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Line 4, column 387, Rule ID: THE_HOW[1]
Message: Did you mean 'how'?
Suggestion: how
...njoyed listening the whole story behind the how to taj mahal build and what is the purp...
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Line 4, column 563, Rule ID: THE_HOW[1]
Message: Did you mean 'how'?
Suggestion: how
... already traveling. I learn many things the how to ancient people were lived in a small...
^^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, first, furthermore, if, moreover, really, regarding, so, therefore, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, to begin with

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 43.0788530466 58% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 52.1666666667 88% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1719.0 1977.66487455 87% => OK
No of words: 375.0 407.700716846 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.584 4.8611393121 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40055868397 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.34306693602 2.67179642975 88% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 212.727598566 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.464 0.524837075471 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 549.0 618.680645161 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.994623655914 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.9653975094 48.9658058833 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.5 100.406767564 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8333333333 20.6045352989 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.55555555556 5.45110844103 157% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0764936820193 0.236089414692 32% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0301642502721 0.076458572812 39% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0330670615645 0.0737576698707 45% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0551663599208 0.150856017488 37% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0422506721755 0.0645574589148 65% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 11.7677419355 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 58.1214874552 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.28 10.9000537634 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.03 8.01818996416 88% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 86.8835125448 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 10.002688172 60% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200

Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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