Traveling is not only a way to gain relaxation, but it is also a treasured opportunity to experience a variety of cultures and customs. There are certain considerations that everyone can take into account when investigating the necessity of having a tour guide during the trip. Some might contend that having a trip alone is desired for it brings more freedom. As far as I am concerned, it is better to travel in a group with a tour guide.
First and foremost, a tour guide can make the trip more fruitful by introducing the sites and related facts. Needless to say, traveling is not only about seeing beautiful sceneries, it also consists of exploring local customs and traditions. The tour guide actually plays an irreplaceable role in introducing background information, such as historical stories related to the sites. What is more, the tour guide can also provide suggestions regarding with itinerary and schedule, letting travelers make most of their time.
Secondly, safety is also a noticeable reason. When hiking in forests or mountains, it is not unlikely for tourists to get lost, which should be prevented. Therefore, it is absolutely necessary to have someone familiar with the region guiding the travelers as well as warning them of potential risks and dangers. After all, no one want to see a pleasant trip turning into a tragedy.
Admittedly, there are some justifications by those who argue that self-traveling is better. In this way, people can plan their time and routes freely, and it also saves the money to hire a guide, which can be spent to make the trip more enjoyable. Nonetheless, I still affirm that having a tour guide is worthwhile. People can gain much information from talking with the guide, making the trip more meaningful. Sometimes, it is even memorable simply to meet local people or other tourists in the group and listen to them talking about their own life and stories.
Due to the aforementioned ground, I firmly believe that the best way to travel is to be in a group led by a tour guide, and having a deeper understanding of local culture and safety are two prime and conspicuous reasons.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 173, Rule ID: ABSOLUTELY_ESSENTIAL[1]
Message: Use simply 'necessary'.
Suggestion: necessary
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, first, if, nonetheless, regarding, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, well, while, after all, such as, talking about, as well as, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 15.1003584229 126% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 43.0788530466 53% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 52.1666666667 81% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1781.0 1977.66487455 90% => OK
No of words: 363.0 407.700716846 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.90633608815 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3649236973 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87724661181 2.67179642975 108% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 212.727598566 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.539944903581 0.524837075471 103% => OK
syllable_count: 566.1 618.680645161 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Interrogative: 2.0 0.994623655914 201% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.4481678399 48.9658058833 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.9444444444 100.406767564 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1666666667 20.6045352989 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.33333333333 5.45110844103 171% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.149464119041 0.236089414692 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0508577851134 0.076458572812 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0524063546686 0.0737576698707 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0966408061244 0.150856017488 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0433319730552 0.0645574589148 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 11.7677419355 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 58.1214874552 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 10.9000537634 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.46 8.01818996416 106% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 86.8835125448 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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