Advertisement is a must in today's world. Nobody without advertisement can live. People belong to this century barely can live with no advertisement. Some people believe they care too much about a bout advertising nowadays. Others believe that they even less than expected advertise because nowadays we have also fake world along with our real world which is somehow disturbing our lives.I strongly agree with this argument that advertisement are much better than real products.
First thing that comes into my mind, if we advertise something on TV or facebook and it does not work that much good we as costumer are the ones who lose but on the other hand if company loses he will go to bankrupcy. My own experience with cream Veet was terrible although it says through internet that there is no hair afterwards I had problem with it. After that purchase I became to this conclusion that I will not trust facebook and its advertisements.
Moreover, I read advertisement of the houses through internet and real estate magazines but when I go to buy them I almost always see higher price that what was in advertisement. Acessories are the other example that in beauty magazines they always show a celebrity that is wearing them. And this is the way that we purchase them.
Furthermore, I do not mean they lie but they exaggerate their product in a way that it can be sold. We as the human being should be smart enough to trust somehow some of them.
In summary, I believe because of these reasons that I stated above I do not agree that advertisement are telling the truth to costumers.
Essay evaluation report
People belong to this century barely can live with no advertisement.
People who belong to this century barely can live with no advertisement.
Sentence: First thing that comes into my mind, if we advertise something on TV or facebook and it does not work that much good we as costumer are the ones who lose but on the other hand if company loses he will go to bankrupcy.
Error: bankrupcy Suggestion: bankruptcy
flaws:
No. of Words: 278 350 //need more content in the third and fourth paragraphs
Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 20 in 30
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 1 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 1 2
No. of Sentences: 14 15
No. of Words: 278 350
No. of Characters: 1285 1500
No. of Different Words: 161 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.083 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.622 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.663 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 78 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 60 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 40 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 24 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 19.857 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 11.55 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.357 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.333 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.604 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.195 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 194, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... people believe they care too much about a bout advertising nowadays. Others beli...
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Line 1, column 389, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: I
...d which is somehow disturbing our lives.I strongly agree with this argument that ...
^
Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'first', 'furthermore', 'if', 'moreover', 'so', 'in summary', 'on the other hand']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.196610169492 0.229887763892 86% => OK
Verbs: 0.179661016949 0.158761421928 113% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0610169491525 0.0866891130778 70% => OK
Adverbs: 0.071186440678 0.046263068375 154% => OK
Pronouns: 0.118644067797 0.0685040099705 173% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.142372881356 0.118717715034 120% => OK
Participles: 0.0169491525424 0.0351676179071 48% => Some participles wanted.
Conjunctions: 2.73480418043 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0203389830508 0.0309702414327 66% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00188951952338 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.071186440678 0.0887237588012 80% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0237288135593 0.0209618222197 113% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0237288135593 0.0139019557991 171% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1596.0 2387.08602151 67% => OK
No of words: 277.0 408.028673835 68% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.76173285199 5.86048508987 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 4.48200974243 91% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.28880866426 0.338922669872 85% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.216606498195 0.251872472559 86% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.148014440433 0.174417080927 85% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0974729241877 0.112833075102 86% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73480418043 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 212.727598566 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.57761732852 0.524397521467 110% => OK
Word variations: 60.3978479068 59.2087087015 102% => OK
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6684587814 68% => OK
Sentence length: 19.7857142857 20.5533526081 96% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.0860789111 48.84282405 131% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.0 120.699889404 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7857142857 20.5533526081 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.642857142857 0.644075263715 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.5376344086 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.54480286738 36% => OK
Readability: 41.4463641052 45.7405998639 91% => OK
Elegance: 0.963302752294 1.45489161554 66% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.153996374511 0.300154397459 51% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.125278984103 0.103427244359 121% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0763554259258 0.0752933317313 101% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.56514433667 0.497263757937 114% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.190015743229 0.151897553556 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0584921675826 0.114077575197 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0328638976212 0.0781384742642 42% => The sentences are too close to each other.
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.194916446848 0.336927656856 58% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0506146593704 0.067059652881 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0968781984929 0.210909579961 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0166378646555 0.0618886996521 27% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 11.8870967742 42% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.86379928315 129% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.91756272401 81% => OK
Positive topic words: 5.0 8.42114695341 59% => OK
Negative topic words: 2.0 2.4623655914 81% => OK
Neutral topic words: 2.0 2.75985663082 72% => OK
Total topic words: 9.0 13.6433691756 66% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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