TPO-19 - Independent Writing Task Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? In order to be well-informed, a person must get information from many different news resources. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

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TPO-19 - Independent Writing Task Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? In order to be well-informed, a person must get information from many different news resources. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

I surely agree that for being well-informed should be getting information from variety news resources. I have some reasons to substantiate my stance which will be explored in the following paragraphs.
First of all, getting information from different news resources can help to prove the news accuracy. In the world, technology progress every day, and anybody access to the internet and could publish any news in site and social network. Some profit-driven people via publishing wrong news get attention other plain people and reach to profit. In this atmosphere where it is increasingly difficult to know the real news of any publisher, you need to get your information from more than one source to compare and examine the reliability of such information.
Another noticeable reason is getting news from several resources can assist people to learn more and expand their knowledge. Sometimes, one news resource investigates one side of the news, like as political, crime and social and maybe one outlet has not all of the news that we like hear about them. These days, adults and youngsters should have validity information about business, technology, and everyday problems. For instance, a youngster who is a computer engineer can get information about healthcare from much different news resource.
Last but not least, someone may argue that getting information and date from variety news resources, perhaps waste our time and money. For instance, a student can depend on one media or source that thinks all news are valid instead of getting much information from different news resources and spend long hour her times. These time can be saved for learning necessary her course. However, I still affirm well-informed people obtain information from several news resources. Although this would be waste time people but, it can be compensated when someone achieves information and be well-informed.
In sum up, I definitely support this idea well-informed person use variety news resources. It gives you a chance to avoid being deceived by the unreliable or careless media.

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Average: 7.6 (1 vote)
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 254, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
...and social and maybe one outlet has not all of the news that we like hear about them. Thes...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 174, Rule ID: ONE_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use the numeral 'one' with plural words. Did you mean 'one medium', 'a medium', or simply 'media'?
Suggestion: one medium; a medium; media
.... For instance, a student can depend on one media or source that thinks all news are vali...
^^^^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, may, so, still, well, for instance, first of all

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 13.8261648746 130% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 43.0788530466 60% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 52.1666666667 69% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.0752688172 161% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1749.0 1977.66487455 88% => OK
No of words: 331.0 407.700716846 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.28398791541 4.8611393121 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26537283232 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85536690806 2.67179642975 107% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 212.727598566 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.567975830816 0.524837075471 108% => OK
syllable_count: 546.3 618.680645161 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.994623655914 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.9528025963 48.9658058833 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.882352941 100.406767564 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4705882353 20.6045352989 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.29411764706 5.45110844103 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.294590764965 0.236089414692 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.11053209253 0.076458572812 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0700324528388 0.0737576698707 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.191931824859 0.150856017488 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.046748885068 0.0645574589148 72% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 11.7677419355 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 58.1214874552 75% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.34 10.9000537634 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.92 8.01818996416 99% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 86.8835125448 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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