TPO-20 - Independent Writing Task Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Successful people try new things and take risks rather than only doing what they know how to do well. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
I certainly agree that successful people try new things and take risks rather than only doing what they know how to do well. I have some reason to substantiate my stance which will explore in the following paragraphs.
First of all, in the globalized world, everything changes very quickly and human encounter with new problems like as air pollution, financial problems, an environmental issue and global warming. These new difficulties don’t key with old ways and need to innovative solution. Successful scientists, engineers, and entrepreneurs take a new risky thing and do unsafe ways to address those mentioned obstacles and issues. This novel solution may help needy people, for instance, the researchers test many dangerous methods to create vaccines for incurable diseases like HIV.
Furthermore, another noticeable reason is attempting new things help to broaden people's perspectives and thinking spectrums. Nowadays, technologies progress every time and humankind experience huge invention in several fields of science and engineering like transportation, communication, health caring, and artificial intelligence. It would be very important for people to be up to date and keep the pace with new progress and be successful. Get new experience and things can assist men to increase their knowledge to choose the best way in their business. For example, the student of computer of engineer for learn more and achievement should test many new applications that may lose all of his information.
Last but not least, all companies compete with each other to reach more profit and be fame. Expression new product with high efficiency is the most important goal of all companies to get more money. For reach, to this achievement, it is necessary for all of manager and worker take risks and do novel things to develop their product. Creating the new product with high-performance increase customer trust and this causes more profit. Based on a research study, which has been carried out in Department of Management of Concordia University in 2016, more than 60% of successful companies have managers that gut try new thing and take risks.
Aforementioned reasons are self-explanatory enough to glimpse on the statement that prosperous people effort novel things with any risks.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, if, may, so, well, for example, for instance, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 13.8261648746 152% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 43.0788530466 44% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 52.1666666667 86% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.0752688172 211% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1935.0 1977.66487455 98% => OK
No of words: 359.0 407.700716846 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.38997214485 4.8611393121 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35284910392 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03753772378 2.67179642975 114% => OK
Unique words: 220.0 212.727598566 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.612813370474 0.524837075471 117% => OK
syllable_count: 582.3 618.680645161 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.994623655914 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.5680236556 48.9658058833 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.823529412 100.406767564 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1176470588 20.6045352989 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.88235294118 5.45110844103 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.272325041013 0.236089414692 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0916224748259 0.076458572812 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.137491243363 0.0737576698707 186% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.184333271927 0.150856017488 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.155549800507 0.0645574589148 241% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 11.7677419355 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 58.1214874552 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.98 10.9000537634 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.03 8.01818996416 113% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 86.8835125448 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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