Being successful in our career need to strengthen our knowledge and experience in the field. However, many people think the ability to have the powerful connection with other has more advantage. In my opinion, I think we should gather a variety of information for our job by studying hard in the school because it will have the positive effect on our decision during solving problems in different situations by using our knowledge.
Firstly, getting a position in well-known institute needs a variety of knowledge in the required field. In our competitive society, each individual has a dream of becoming professional in their work. Since high qualified job needs the advance degree. To give an example, a physician should take university entrance exam for being accepted in the medical school. In other words, knowledge from their school years can help them to pass the test and get the permission.
Second, knowledge about our job comes from sequential daily practice which gives us the confidence to continue our job. A physician learns how to heal the patient by prescribing drugs, Also, gives the instructive advice to them. In addition, only the training physician can help the patient during the emergency situation. In other hands, the one has poor medical knowledge could not control the catastrophic case.
In conclusion, success in the future job needs a motivate student who works hard daily. I do not support the statement of relationship with people can help us to find our dream job due to above reasons.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 201, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Since” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...of becoming professional in their work. Since high qualified job needs the advance de...
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Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...d not control the catastrophic case. In conclusion, success in the future job n...
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Line 7, column 48, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...lusion, success in the future job needs a motivate student who works hard daily. I do not ...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 152, Rule ID: HELP_TO_FIND[1]
Message: This phrase is probably grammatically incorrect. Write 'help us find' instead.
Suggestion: help us find
...atement of relationship with people can help us to find our dream job due to above reasons.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, second, so, then, well, i think, in addition, in conclusion, in my opinion, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 15.1003584229 13% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 13.8261648746 14% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 11.0286738351 18% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 43.0788530466 46% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 52.1666666667 79% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1278.0 1977.66487455 65% => OK
No of words: 251.0 407.700716846 62% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.09163346614 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98032404683 4.48103885553 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7589173986 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 212.727598566 70% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.593625498008 0.524837075471 113% => OK
syllable_count: 389.7 618.680645161 63% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 9.59856630824 21% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.994623655914 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.0724732166 48.9658058833 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.2857142857 100.406767564 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9285714286 20.6045352989 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.92857142857 5.45110844103 164% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.155992573384 0.236089414692 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0512111085498 0.076458572812 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0499956567733 0.0737576698707 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10431793764 0.150856017488 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0650727159444 0.0645574589148 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 11.7677419355 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 58.1214874552 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 10.9000537634 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.76 8.01818996416 109% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 86.8835125448 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
More content wanted.
Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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