I definitely think that people should wait for a satisfactory job. Some persons can consciously weigh the pros and cons of each element. The explanations go as follows.
First of all, a gratifying job promotes folk efficacy or creativity. Different motivation resources are required to whet people’s appetites to fulfill their tasks correctly. These motivations including a money award, a free vacation, or even a pleasure job can conjure up somebody's feeling to reach to a high performance. Besides, according to a research, which recently has been carried out in society department of Harvard University, having a pleased career is the most incentive factor for someone to be genius. In other words, a pleasure job stimulates people to see all hidden aspect of a subject or task, and as a consequence either suggest a productive idea or invent a new marvelous stuff.
Furthermore, avoiding from psychological and physical problems is another noticeable support. These days, humankind encounter with a huge progress and advancement in different fields of technology and science. Although these technical and theoretical achievements offer mankind lots of benefits, they also bring us anxiety and depression. Somebody, for instance, has to start working early in the morning and continue it late at night. Being satisfying with your job is a key factor that can help people to tolerate jobs’ difficulties, and so contribute to relieve the stress or keep away the pressure.
Admittedly, there are some justifications by one who argues that adults should choose a secure job right away. Chiefly, nowadays, it is very difficult for people to land a gratify job due to the world unemployment or economical criticism. Thus, finding a likable job should be a long term and suffering procedure, and perhaps waste your time and money. However, still I affirm that individuals should stay for a pleasure job. For instance, labor market shows signs of improvement or there are several voluntary activities, which mainly conducted by private institutes, to assist people to find a desirable job within minimum of a time.
Due to aforementioned ground, I think all people should bear in mind that it is better to wait for a pleased job. Participating of more performance and preventing from illness are two prime and conspicuous reasons.
Essay evaluation report
flaws:
Still has issues.
Suppose A:
Thus, finding a likable job should be a long term and suffering procedure, and perhaps waste your time and money.
suppose B:
However, still I affirm that individuals should stay for a pleasure job. For instance, labor market shows signs of improvement or there are several voluntary activities, which mainly conducted by private institutes, to assist people to find a desirable job within minimum of a time.
A is not so closely related to B. B should be something like this:
yes, it will waste time and money in a short time, but once you can find a satisfying job, it will compensate all the loss in the future. Second, a secure job that you don't like may suffer people in a long term too, so how to count those time and money loss. Third, there are a lot of job agencies or job websites like IinkedIn that can help people find good jobs quickly...
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Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 23 in 30
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 20 15
No. of Words: 374 350
No. of Characters: 1904 1500
No. of Different Words: 238 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.398 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.091 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.967 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 148 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 115 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 81 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 58 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 18.7 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 7.843 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.55 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.274 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.504 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.031 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 437, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
... morning and continue it late at night. Being satisfying with your job is a key factor that can ...
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Line 5, column 609, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e the stress or keep away the pressure. Admittedly, there are some justification...
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Line 7, column 171, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...it is very difficult for people to land a gratify job due to the world unemployment or ec...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'besides', 'but', 'first', 'furthermore', 'however', 'if', 'so', 'still', 'thus', 'as to', 'for instance', 'i think', 'first of all', 'in other words']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.254117647059 0.229887763892 111% => OK
Verbs: 0.152941176471 0.158761421928 96% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0870588235294 0.0866891130778 100% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0541176470588 0.046263068375 117% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0258823529412 0.0685040099705 38% => OK
Prepositions: 0.0870588235294 0.118717715034 73% => OK
Participles: 0.0376470588235 0.0351676179071 107% => OK
Conjunctions: 3.08926644359 2.67179642975 116% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0376470588235 0.0309702414327 122% => OK
Particles: 0.00705882352941 0.00188951952338 374% => OK
Determiners: 0.0917647058824 0.0887237588012 103% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0188235294118 0.0209618222197 90% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00941176470588 0.0139019557991 68% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2348.0 2387.08602151 98% => OK
No of words: 374.0 408.028673835 92% => OK
Chars per words: 6.27807486631 5.86048508987 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3976220399 4.48200974243 98% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.411764705882 0.338922669872 121% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.31550802139 0.251872472559 125% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.24064171123 0.174417080927 138% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.181818181818 0.112833075102 161% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.08926644359 2.67179642975 116% => OK
Unique words: 237.0 212.727598566 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.633689839572 0.524397521467 121% => OK
Word variations: 79.8591791018 59.2087087015 135% => OK
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6684587814 97% => OK
Sentence length: 18.7 20.5533526081 91% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.0478634344 48.84282405 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.4 120.699889404 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7 20.5533526081 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.75 0.644075263715 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.5376344086 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.54480286738 54% => OK
Readability: 50.250802139 45.7405998639 110% => OK
Elegance: 1.62626262626 1.45489161554 112% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.335642078014 0.300154397459 112% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0480292252048 0.103427244359 46% => Sentence sentence coherence is low.
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0391593788043 0.0752933317313 52% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.468035001338 0.497263757937 94% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.0847252398259 0.151897553556 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.111704504779 0.114077575197 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0577619181282 0.0781384742642 74% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.235410075953 0.336927656856 70% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0717799808959 0.067059652881 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.211046565141 0.210909579961 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0326376176094 0.0618886996521 53% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8870967742 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.86379928315 155% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.91756272401 61% => OK
Positive topic words: 8.0 8.42114695341 95% => OK
Negative topic words: 4.0 2.4623655914 162% => OK
Neutral topic words: 2.0 2.75985663082 72% => OK
Total topic words: 14.0 13.6433691756 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 83.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 25.0 Out of 30
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