In the modern era, every people struggling for finding the good job because of increase the human population and migration of the people in urban area from the rural area. From my vantage point, I certainly agree that if people have the chance to get a secure job, they should take it right away rather than wait a job that would be more satisfying. I choose my stance for few reasons which discuss in the forthcoming paragraphs.
To begin with, a person can save time if he gets the secure job because of stiff competition in each and every field. If he gets the job then he does not seek waste time for seeking a job. Time is money and he uses it at appropriate thing. For example, me and my friend was find the job after graduation, one day we got the job latter, I felt very ecstatic because of first my job latter, I join to the company but my friend refute the job because of company paid average salary and she wait for those job for satisfied salary. In present, I work still work with high salary because of increment of my salary but my friend still find the job and waste her time.
Furthermore, a person can save money also with secure job because of when we wait for job which is provide high salary, we have to find, it is tough to satisfied job. If person wait then, he need both money and confidence. Find the job and interview that time we need time to find the jobs and until the person has no job so, he depends on their parents. All this reasons it is better to accept the opportunity and save money by doing the job. As an example, above mention that my friend till today she depend on their parents and not save any money but I was save some money by average salary.
Moreover, a person gets the knowledge and experience by job. If person wait for good job but it is not guarantee that he soon find the job, if he not get the soon job then increase the chance of many adult are depress and lose their confidence. In addition, life some time give opportunity for make secure career. So, we have not give up that chance but accept it and learn more things, expand knowledge and experience.
In conclusion, contemplating all the aforementioned reasons, secure job benefits for human life it is save time and money and help to learn from the experience and expand to knowledge. I would strongly subscribe the fact that if a person has opportunity to make a secure career rather than wait for good job.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 487, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'she' must be used with a third-person verb: 'waits'.
Suggestion: waits
... of company paid average salary and she wait for those job for satisfied salary. In ...
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Line 3, column 100, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'provided'.
Suggestion: provided
...ecause of when we wait for job which is provide high salary, we have to find, it is tou...
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Line 3, column 503, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'she' must be used with a third-person verb: 'depends'.
Suggestion: depends
...e mention that my friend till today she depend on their parents and not save any money...
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Line 4, column 150, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[3]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'gets'.
Suggestion: gets
...ee that he soon find the job, if he not get the soon job then increase the chance o...
^^^
Line 4, column 210, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'depressed'.
Suggestion: depressed
...n increase the chance of many adult are depress and lose their confidence. In addition,...
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Line 4, column 330, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'given'.
Suggestion: given
...for make secure career. So, we have not give up that chance but accept it and learn ...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, moreover, so, still, then, for example, in addition, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 23.0 13.8261648746 166% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 52.0 43.0788530466 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 52.1666666667 82% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.0752688172 149% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1974.0 1977.66487455 100% => OK
No of words: 452.0 407.700716846 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.36725663717 4.8611393121 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.61088837703 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.34716892735 2.67179642975 88% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 212.727598566 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.41592920354 0.524837075471 79% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 636.3 618.680645161 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.994623655914 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.6095583707 48.9658058833 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.894736842 100.406767564 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.7894736842 20.6045352989 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.10526315789 5.45110844103 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.318530306243 0.236089414692 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.120044169213 0.076458572812 157% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.107150560455 0.0737576698707 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.21728264156 0.150856017488 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.076527221558 0.0645574589148 119% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 11.7677419355 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 58.1214874552 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.36 10.9000537634 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.98 8.01818996416 87% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 86.8835125448 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 10.002688172 130% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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