Working hours have always been one of the most challenging matters for humankind. Some people think that they should work for long hours in a day and be free in the next day and some people think otherwise. I personally believe that working only for three days in a week is not a good idea, because of many reasons such as getting bored of long hours in a day or losing an opportunity to have a normal schedule.
First and foremost, long hours working in a day are boring. People are getting tired after around 6 hours. They cannot work perfectly in the rest of the day. Consequently, they will be tired in the next day, because they worked hard in the past day.
Second, people need to have a determined schedule. Going to work in some days of week is a kind of unusual thing that can happen in each person's life. Most people work in normal hours in a day, so these kinds of unusual schedules are going to make some trouble for them who work three days. In the other word, most of people have normal work hours, so they will be plan their parties after work hours. On the other hand, some people have unusual schedule and they cannot hang out with their friends in three days a week, so they will lost lot of opportunities in their life. Obviously, these kinds of three days working jobs are rare and most people have full time job with completely normal hours.
Third, these kinds of three days works have lot of stress. For instance, I used to work in a distribution company back in my home country Iran. Our CEO offered me three days job, because I was looking for an online university to continue my major in the master grade. I thought this is a really good chance to have an offer for working in less days, so I accepted it immediately. After two weeks, I decided to come back to my new schedule, because I had many phone calls during each day from other employees to ask me questions which was related to my job.
To sum up, people have different ideas about work hours, but if I were in a situation to choose between three days work and five days work, I would choose five days work for sure, because of those mentioned reasons.
Essay evaluation report
Sentence: On the other hand, some people have unusual schedule and they cannot hang out with their friends in three days a week, so they will lost lot of opportunities in their life.
Description: A modal auxillary is not usually followed by a verb, past participle
Suggestion: Refer to will and lost
flaws:
1. No. of Words: 400 while No. of Different Words: 185 //more different words wanted
We are expecting:
No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
2. More sentences varieties wanted. Try to use less pronouns (like 'They') or 'people' as the subject of a sentence.
3. Always add a blank line between paragraphs.
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Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 22 in 30
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 1 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 19 15
No. of Words: 400 350
No. of Characters: 1695 1500
No. of Different Words: 185 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.472 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.238 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.16 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 90 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 59 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 29 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 20 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 21.053 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 9.822 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.632 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.375 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.575 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.151 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 331, Rule ID: BORED_OF[1]
Message: Did you mean 'bored with'?
Suggestion: bored with
...because of many reasons such as getting bored of long hours in a day or losing an opport...
^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 138, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'persons'' or 'person's'?
Suggestion: persons'; person's
...f unusual thing that can happen in each persons life. Most people work in normal hours ...
^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 311, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the people') or simply say ''most people''.
Suggestion: most of the people; most people
...who work three days. In the other word, most of people have normal work hours, so they will be...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 535, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'lose'
Suggestion: lose
...ends in three days a week, so they will lost lot of opportunities in their life. Obv...
^^^^
Line 5, column 656, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled as one.
Suggestion: fulltime
...king jobs are rare and most people have full time job with completely normal hours. Thi...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 6, column 340, Rule ID: FEWER_LESS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun days is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
... chance to have an offer for working in less days, so I accepted it immediately. Aft...
^^^^
Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'consequently', 'first', 'if', 'look', 'really', 'second', 'so', 'third', 'for instance', 'kind of', 'such as', 'to sum up', 'on the other hand']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.241150442478 0.229887763892 105% => OK
Verbs: 0.150442477876 0.158761421928 95% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0818584070796 0.0866891130778 94% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0398230088496 0.046263068375 86% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0641592920354 0.0685040099705 94% => OK
Prepositions: 0.143805309735 0.118717715034 121% => OK
Participles: 0.037610619469 0.0351676179071 107% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.23998245887 2.67179642975 84% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0309734513274 0.0309702414327 100% => OK
Particles: 0.00442477876106 0.00188951952338 234% => OK
Determiners: 0.0818584070796 0.0887237588012 92% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0176991150442 0.0209618222197 84% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00663716814159 0.0139019557991 48% => Some subClauses wanted starting by 'Which, Who, What, Whom, Whose.....'
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2203.0 2387.08602151 92% => OK
No of words: 409.0 408.028673835 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.38630806846 5.86048508987 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49708221141 4.48200974243 100% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.251833740831 0.338922669872 74% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.163814180929 0.251872472559 65% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.0757946210269 0.174417080927 43% => More words length more than 7 chars wanted.
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0611246943765 0.112833075102 54% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.23998245887 2.67179642975 84% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 212.727598566 91% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.474327628362 0.524397521467 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 51.435817519 59.2087087015 87% => OK
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6684587814 97% => OK
Sentence length: 20.45 20.5533526081 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.5139584669 48.84282405 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.15 120.699889404 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.45 20.5533526081 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.7 0.644075263715 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.5376344086 132% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.54480286738 108% => OK
Readability: 36.8314180929 45.7405998639 81% => OK
Elegance: 1.66086956522 1.45489161554 114% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.295183256739 0.300154397459 98% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.146647291525 0.103427244359 142% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.126432707815 0.0752933317313 168% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.571461420473 0.497263757937 115% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.197584759512 0.151897553556 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.11917192843 0.114077575197 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0564448746645 0.0781384742642 72% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.285949728082 0.336927656856 85% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.121650765361 0.067059652881 181% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.18057354203 0.210909579961 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0800507500732 0.0618886996521 129% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8870967742 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.86379928315 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.91756272401 102% => OK
Positive topic words: 8.0 8.42114695341 95% => OK
Negative topic words: 7.0 2.4623655914 284% => OK
Neutral topic words: 4.0 2.75985663082 145% => OK
Total topic words: 19.0 13.6433691756 139% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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