There is no doubt that the modern society is changing far more quickly than the past, however, it never means that people live in today are less happy or satisfied for the following reasons.
To begin with, with the highly development technology, more and more enjoyments for people can be obtained by various of instruments. Not like ancients who just have few dramas to enjoy in a whole year, nowadays, people can watch TV, enjoy movies and surf the Internet to get news. And the most important is, people can do these activities in any time and any where thus even though they face some difficulties or troubles, they can forget all these sad things to refresh themselves which is almost impossible for ancient people. For example, I can watch comedies by smartphones or just view my friends’ twitter to enjoy myself each time I am tired of study. So with the abundant enjoyments, people today are truly happier and satisfied than ancient people.
Then, as we all know, health is one of the most important things for people’s feel of happiness. And no one can deny that modern people are more health than the past by health diet, improvement of medical technology and harmony society. For instance, according to a research by the Beijing University in 2016, the modern people’s life span is 20 years more than the ancient people. This can really show that we have a better life. And think about that if you are in the past when there is always in wars without any peace or not enough health food to eat, I don’t think people will be happy or satisfied because they always worry about their own and their family members safety.
Admittedly, living in the past without infinite competition is some people’s dream who just want to farm lands. But what they forget is that they have to care about more other troubles such as wars and diseases. In fact, ancient people are never happy or satisfied even though he is a king.
Due to the aforementioned reasons, in a rapidly changing world, people are far more satisfied than in the past.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, really, so, then, thus, as to, for example, for instance, in fact, no doubt, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 43.0788530466 63% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 52.1666666667 82% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1715.0 1977.66487455 87% => OK
No of words: 359.0 407.700716846 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.77715877437 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35284910392 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54827917843 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 212.727598566 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.526462395543 0.524837075471 100% => OK
syllable_count: 520.2 618.680645161 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.994623655914 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.8822578091 48.9658058833 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.333333333 100.406767564 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.9333333333 20.6045352989 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.8 5.45110844103 143% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.217729946691 0.236089414692 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0822054800044 0.076458572812 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0671377485489 0.0737576698707 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.143145274532 0.150856017488 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0405343825507 0.0645574589148 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 11.7677419355 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 58.1214874552 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.74 10.9000537634 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.24 8.01818996416 90% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 86.8835125448 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 10.002688172 135% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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