TPO-31- Independent Writing Task Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?Because the world is changing so quickly, people now are less happy or less satisfied with their lives than people were in the pastUse specific reasons and examples to

Nowadays globe is changing faster than ever. Every moment, a new device is invented and technology becomes improved. Some people believe this rapid surge brings people less happiness but my opinion is exactly in contrary. I have some reasons as follow:

First, new technologies make our lives easier. For example, in past, there were not good communication devices and people had to bear difficulty in communicating with each other but now it becomes very easy and only you need a phone to communicate with people in all of the world. These devices save a fair amount of your time and even your time.

Moreover, people have more facilities to make fun. As a very commonplace example, think about cars. Past people did not have a convenient vehicle to commute and at least have a vacation in weekends but today, people have more welfare to plan a trip and have a joyful time with their family or friends.

Finally, although momentous changes need spending more time to adapt but bring people variety of choice. In past, for example, people had the narrow choice to select a job. The common job was farming but now people have a vast area of jobs which are the results of new technologies. In additional, due to lack of enhanced devices in past, people always repeat their tasks but now because of sufficient equipment, people can brainstorm and change their style of life in better form.

To sum up, I think that this fast changing of a world is very beneficial for people and make their life easier. Now, people have more incentive to improve and have more resources to raise their knowledge. Expert people are vital to have a progressing world.

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Average: 6 (1 vote)
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'as follows'?
Suggestion: as follows
...xactly in contrary. I have some reasons as follow: First, new technologies make our li...
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Message: Did you mean: 'in the past'?
Suggestion: in the past
...ies make our lives easier. For example, in past, there were not good communication devi...
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Suggestion: all the
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Message: Did you mean: 'In the past'?
Suggestion: In the past
...apt but bring people variety of choice. In past, for example, people had the narrow cho...
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Message: Did you mean: 'in the past'?
Suggestion: in the past
...tional, due to lack of enhanced devices in past, people always repeat their tasks but n...
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'finally', 'first', 'if', 'moreover', 'so', 'at least', 'for example', 'i think', 'in addition', 'to sum up']

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.238993710692 0.229887763892 104% => OK
Verbs: 0.163522012579 0.158761421928 103% => OK
Adjectives: 0.11320754717 0.0866891130778 131% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0660377358491 0.046263068375 143% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0408805031447 0.0685040099705 60% => OK
Prepositions: 0.100628930818 0.118717715034 85% => OK
Participles: 0.0188679245283 0.0351676179071 54% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.49114034806 2.67179642975 93% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0377358490566 0.0309702414327 122% => OK
Particles: 0.00314465408805 0.00188951952338 166% => OK
Determiners: 0.0754716981132 0.0887237588012 85% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.00314465408805 0.0209618222197 15% => Some modal verbs wanted.
WH_determiners: 0.00314465408805 0.0139019557991 23% => Some subClauses wanted starting by 'Which, Who, What, Whom, Whose.....'

Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1654.0 2387.08602151 69% => OK
No of words: 286.0 408.028673835 70% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.78321678322 5.86048508987 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 4.48200974243 92% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.332167832168 0.338922669872 98% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.213286713287 0.251872472559 85% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.132867132867 0.174417080927 76% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0839160839161 0.112833075102 74% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49114034806 2.67179642975 93% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 212.727598566 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.56993006993 0.524397521467 109% => OK
Word variations: 59.6810144962 59.2087087015 101% => OK
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6684587814 77% => OK
Sentence length: 17.875 20.5533526081 87% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.9750150834 48.84282405 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.375 120.699889404 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.875 20.5533526081 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.6875 0.644075263715 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.5376344086 110% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.54480286738 90% => OK
Readability: 39.2036713287 45.7405998639 86% => OK
Elegance: 1.32558139535 1.45489161554 91% => OK

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.313796024718 0.300154397459 105% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0908762449932 0.103427244359 88% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0701880035514 0.0752933317313 93% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.517605020364 0.497263757937 104% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.182627649059 0.151897553556 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.108600972631 0.114077575197 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0652978935279 0.0781384742642 84% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.230001749944 0.336927656856 68% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0719624502198 0.067059652881 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.184720849829 0.210909579961 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.028719594172 0.0618886996521 46% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.

Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8870967742 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.86379928315 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.91756272401 102% => OK
Positive topic words: 11.0 8.42114695341 131% => OK
Negative topic words: 0.0 2.4623655914 0% => More negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 3.0 2.75985663082 109% => OK
Total topic words: 14.0 13.6433691756 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

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Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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