money is a precious element for all age group people that's why some parent think they can offer money for high grade at school exam. As far as i am concerned, i think this is a good idea. This view is based on few reasons, which will be explore in the following essay.
To begin with, when you offer money to child they fill motivated to do well in exam to get high grade. Some time it work like a tonic for student, if they have once motivated for reading and doing well in exam it is good for study. My own experience is a good example of this. My uncle offer if i will got A+ grade in final exam he will give me a bicycle when i was at 9 year old. it a great opportunity for me to get a new bicycle for that reasons i try my best to get A+, finally i get A+ that is really motivated for me since that age i have never doing bad in exam all the time i got A+ mark.
Secondly, Student at the age of school have need motivation or puss for betterment in study, some time it a great responsibility of parents that why they can offer some kind of bride like money, toy, traveling that all are betterment for his future. in my opinion this kind of braid are really essential for student to do well in school.
Finally, some people think that it not good for them since childhood it make them greedy and bad mannered. Some it true that money make student more careless and irresponsible. it is possible they have involve in bad environment. for example my friend is good student when he got money from his parents he make friend with bad mannered student. finally involve in drug consuming.
In sum, my opinion are discussed above and i think this a good idea for student to do well in study. some student who are not interesting for study it work for them because every one wants money.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, if, really, second, secondly, so, well, for example, i think, kind of, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 13.8261648746 36% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 53.0 43.0788530466 123% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 52.1666666667 71% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1450.0 1977.66487455 73% => OK
No of words: 346.0 407.700716846 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.19075144509 4.8611393121 86% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31289638616 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.28134845435 2.67179642975 85% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 212.727598566 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.453757225434 0.524837075471 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 472.5 618.680645161 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.994623655914 101% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.7187840574 48.9658058833 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.2941176471 100.406767564 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3529411765 20.6045352989 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.35294117647 5.45110844103 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 27.0 5.5376344086 488% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.354165759969 0.236089414692 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.123719165895 0.076458572812 162% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0773783220958 0.0737576698707 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.220329271459 0.150856017488 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0654497865812 0.0645574589148 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.5 11.7677419355 72% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 58.1214874552 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.02 10.9000537634 64% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.59 8.01818996416 82% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 86.8835125448 49% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.