"Parents are an inevitable part of person's life" said Bernard Russell, one of the brilliant mind through the history. There is no doubt because of the economic condition, all parents extremely busy also, this is one of the controversial issues in every modern society, affecting people in all walks of life considerably. The question, however, is that whether to play sport or do some school work with them has sparked spirited debate among people recently. I am, to a huge extent, prefer having fun playing games or sports. In the ensuing paragraph, I will try to shed some light on my perspective through ample examples and conspicuous reasons.
The exquisite to be mentioned is that it is crystal clear that when we try to make fun for our children, we can be friendlier with them also make our relationship closer in order to show them we never forget them. For instance, when I was a child, my parent worked in bank nonetheless, my mother and father always brought me to park because they wanted to show me that I am valuable for them. In my opinion when we have close contact with them, thus they easily talk about their problems to us.
Another reason which deserves some words here is that nobody can deny that the most crucial concern of every parent is about the health of their children, moreover teachers in the school to concentrate on lessons and increase their knowledge, hence we can do some exercises with our children to insure about their health in addition, decrease the some possible disease which is really popular among children like: blood pressure, diabetes and obesity. Actually by some video games we can stimulate their imagination also, it is good exercise for their brain. As a clarification we have various types of games, some of them try include mathematics questions or give them some useful information about some animals, thus by this advance try to improve our children and immune them from illness.
Although the aforementioned is the first reasons which cross the mind at the first glance, but they no mean that only ones. Actually there is another subtle point which must be born in mind. It should be noted that parents should be aware about grade of their children in school additionally try to recognize their interest and talents to give them better facilities to enhance them though never forget that all of them based on their health. As an illustration one of my friends really creative in the field of physics, but because she has depression, could not to continue her way, so the most important thing for children is safety beside another thing.
To make a long story short, from all the above mentioned points and reasons, one we can safely draw a conclusion that if one weight merits and demerits of all the above statements, one soon we can realize that the benefits of caring about children's fun is out number its drawback. That is why I firmly believe that children who has cheerful life, can be more successful.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, first, hence, however, if, moreover, nonetheless, really, so, thus, another thing, for instance, in addition, no doubt, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 15.1003584229 146% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 21.0 11.0286738351 190% => OK
Pronoun: 71.0 43.0788530466 165% => OK
Preposition: 70.0 52.1666666667 134% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2506.0 1977.66487455 127% => OK
No of words: 513.0 407.700716846 126% => OK
Chars per words: 4.88499025341 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.75914943092 4.48103885553 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56741797006 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 274.0 212.727598566 129% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.534113060429 0.524837075471 102% => OK
syllable_count: 765.0 618.680645161 124% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.994623655914 101% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.1344086022 149% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 94.1793547708 48.9658058833 192% => OK
Chars per sentence: 147.411764706 100.406767564 147% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.1764705882 20.6045352989 146% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.05882352941 5.45110844103 166% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.164192306608 0.236089414692 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0573437772089 0.076458572812 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0490343568333 0.0737576698707 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0904573472784 0.150856017488 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0467360180131 0.0645574589148 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.6 11.7677419355 141% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.49 58.1214874552 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 10.1575268817 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.62 10.9000537634 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.85 8.01818996416 110% => OK
difficult_words: 121.0 86.8835125448 139% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.0537634409 139% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.247311828 137% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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