Celebrities and athletics are always admired by people and also their quotes and opinion are appreciated. However, fervor debates continues as whether their quotes are important to adult or old. Maxim and sentiments of famous people are significant to younger than old people.
To begin with, younger people usually are deprive of aspiration and they need a role model, to whom they can ensue. The celebrities are source of inspiration to them. For instance, Mika Singh, for runner to win gold medal in Olypmic, is admired by whole indian youngster. All youngster want to be like him, so country can bring more young legends like him. On the other hand, Old people are basically already involved in their early routine, they don't have any role model. They just read the news about the achievement, without bothering to be like athletics.
Furthermore, famous people life are full of struggle. They may have taken onerous journey to be national hero such as athletics and opinion dealing with such riddle may be guide to youth since your are unschooled about how to deal with real life challenges. The life of Mia kalifa was full of privation but she succeeded to be world famous actor by achieving Grammy award in 2010. By reading her opinion towards life journey, how to deal with obstacles usher the youth to deal riddle without getting frustrated. However, for old people, they may admire such opinion but they are too late to walk in the path of people they admire. They are just like sitting in a quagmire.
However, some may believe that old people are in obligatory position. So if they hear the athletics opinion, then incumbent personnel can change to lawsuit according to their desire. But I still insist it is more helpful to youngsters. Because most of law pursuit are in the favor of athletics, but what they most teach is how to chase for goals. This knowledge is important to young people as they have lot of energy to do it.
In conclusion, views of athletics is most pivotal to adult as they teach how to deal with things, become role model. Therefore, I believe, young people should know about views and experience of athletics in order to success in their goal.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 31, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[10]
Message: The adverb 'usually' is usually put between 'are' and 'deprive'.
Suggestion: are usually deprive
...eople. To begin with, younger people usually are deprive of aspiration and they need a role mode...
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Line 3, column 43, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'deprived'.
Suggestion: deprived
... begin with, younger people usually are deprive of aspiration and they need a role mode...
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Line 3, column 448, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...y involved in their early routine, they dont have any role model. They just read the...
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Line 5, column 367, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[8]
Message: The proper name in singular (Grammy) must be used with a third-person verb: 'awards'.
Suggestion: awards
... world famous actor by achieving Grammy award in 2010. By reading her opinion towards...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, may, so, still, then, therefore, for instance, in conclusion, such as, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 15.1003584229 159% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 11.0286738351 18% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 30.0 43.0788530466 70% => OK
Preposition: 66.0 52.1666666667 127% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1816.0 1977.66487455 92% => OK
No of words: 377.0 407.700716846 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.81697612732 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4064143971 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4731103194 2.67179642975 93% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 212.727598566 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.53050397878 0.524837075471 101% => OK
syllable_count: 568.8 618.680645161 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.994623655914 101% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.6862263373 48.9658058833 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.5454545455 100.406767564 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1363636364 20.6045352989 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.36363636364 5.45110844103 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 18.0 11.8709677419 152% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.195138354695 0.236089414692 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0602563003918 0.076458572812 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0501145163247 0.0737576698707 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110008523473 0.150856017488 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0368386833157 0.0645574589148 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 11.7677419355 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 58.1214874552 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.38 10.9000537634 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.87 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 86.8835125448 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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