There are certain considerations that everyone can take into account to investigate and examine the necessity of knowing what is happening around the world, even if the events are irrelevant to people's life. Some might contend that reading news is a waste of time and do not brings about any useful information that can guide our actions. Nonetheless, I would like to suggest that getting to know what is happening around the globe is necessary.
First and foremost, knowing the latest events keeps us informed, satisfying our nature of curiosity, as the flow of information is an unstoppable trend during the development of the world. By reading news, people can have a glance at foreign cultures, which can boost mutual understanding between different countries. On the contrary, if they only care about things around them, they would know little about the outside world, and are unable to celebrate the shining points of other thoughts and cultures.
Secondly, it is hard to argue that an event happened in parts of the world has no connections with our lives. With the advent of technology, humans living on the Earth is increasingly connected and intertwined, and almost every major event happened in a place has certain impacts on the other side of the planet. This is best illustrated with the example of the global market. The strike in South America, for instance, can lead to a rise in the price of candies in other continents. This is because the paper used to wrap and pack candies are made from wood produced in the South America. Thus, no individual can escape the influence of things going on in other parts of the world, and it is of grate significant to know what is happening around the world.
Finally, the competition between different countries is another argument comes to mind. During the past several decades, the emergence of new technologies and the accumulation of knowledge has only the competition between countries more fierce. Were people to lead in this game, they would have to know their competitors, making it crucial to watch the newest ideas and innovations in other parts of the world. It is no exaggeration to say that people who do not care about the progress made by others would eventually be outcompeted.
Due to aforementioned ground, I firmly believe that it is essential for people to know what is happening in the world, regardless of whether those events are directly connected to their life or not.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'bring'?
Suggestion: bring
...ding news is a waste of time and do not brings about any useful information that can g...
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Line 7, column 246, Rule ID: WERE_VBB[2]
Message: Did you mean 'where' or 'we'?
Suggestion: Where; We
...petition between countries more fierce. Were people to lead in this game, they would...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, if, nonetheless, second, secondly, so, thus, for instance, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 15.1003584229 146% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 43.0788530466 65% => OK
Preposition: 73.0 52.1666666667 140% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2046.0 1977.66487455 103% => OK
No of words: 414.0 407.700716846 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.94202898551 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.51076378781 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75406386846 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 214.0 212.727598566 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.51690821256 0.524837075471 98% => OK
syllable_count: 639.9 618.680645161 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.994623655914 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.1344086022 119% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.0178204001 48.9658058833 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.352941176 100.406767564 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.3529411765 20.6045352989 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.29411764706 5.45110844103 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.213684910665 0.236089414692 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0676808646015 0.076458572812 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0566657289492 0.0737576698707 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124547148218 0.150856017488 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0384704399665 0.0645574589148 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 11.7677419355 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 58.1214874552 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.67 10.9000537634 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.07 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 86.8835125448 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 10.002688172 155% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.0537634409 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.